*More and more people are relying on the private car as their major means of transportation. Describe some of the problems over-reliance on cars can cause, and suggest at least one possible solution*

A high number of individuals in recent times depend more on private cars as their main mode of
transport
which has some demerits including environmental pollution and rise in
traffic
congestion. These and more would be discussed in
this
essay along with some solutions proffered.
First
of all, the overt use of personal vehicles by people causes an increase in
traffic
congestion.
This
is because
increase
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an increase
the increase
increases
in the number of private cars on roads will slow down
traffic
, implying that time is
unnecessary
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unnecessarily
wasted and stress level is raised
thus
, affecting people's health.
In addition
, environmental pollution and potential damage could occur with
this
development. According to the Journal of Australian Geophysists, a rise in the number of vehicles plying roads leads to more carbon emissions (from car exhaust pipes) which
further
depletes the ozone layer, posing a threat to our environment.
Secondly
, with people relying too much on private vehicles for movement, living in isolation is encouraged.
This
is
as a result
of reduced interaction with people as personal cars offer privacy. By so doing, opportunities to communicate with others while taking public form of
transport
is lost, diminishing interpersonal relationships, resulting in people living socially unhealthy. One effective step to tackle
this
issue is by the government enforcing regulations to limit the usage of private cars in certain metropolitan areas.
This
in turn leads to reduced
traffic
congestion and environmental damage from exhaust pollutants.
For instance
,
only public
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the only public transport
transport
is allowed in the capital city of Senegal within the
last
five years and
this
has aided in resolving their
traffic
problems.
Furthermore
, people can be educated on the financial, social and environmental implications of the increase in personal
motors
a vaguely specified concern
matters
for private
transport
, encouraging them to patronise public transportation for some trips. In conclusion, while it is obvious that more people utilise their private vehicles for
transport
, it is associated with some problems. I believe that
this
issue should be observed closely by the government and adequately assessed for the good of the masses at large.
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