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Some people think that children should start to learn foreign language at a very early agr.Do you agree or disagree

#people #children #language #agr
As the time passes
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,
foreign languages become more popular and important.
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The
 more languages you know
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,
there
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are
 more chances to find your desiring job. One part of the society thinks that learning foreign languages from childhood is more
advantegeous
giving an advantage
advantageous
advantages
adventurous
 while other parts disagree.Let me consider what the advantages and disadvantages of the given statement is.
To begin
 with
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according
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in the direction of
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 some experts it is not recommended to start learning foreign languages from the early ages because
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then
 children find it
diffucult
not easy; requiring great physical or mental effort to accomplish or comprehend or endure
difficult
 to start speaking on their native languages.Perhaps we should
also
 point out the fact that children should enjoy their childhood.
Anyway they
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Anyway, they
 will have enough time in their later ages to learn languages
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but one fact that needs to be said is that it is easier for children to learn languages at
the earlier
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earlier
the earliest
 ages. One argument in support of
this
 is my own experience
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that my
neohew
a son of your brother or sister
nephew
 has started speaking English when he was very little and now he is already seven and is able to fluently speak in two languages.

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