More and more people are moving away from an agricultural background to relocate to cities in order to look for work. What will be the consequences of this? What solutions can you offer?

Over the
last
few decades, there has been an unprecedented rise in urbanisation. A growing number of individuals from rural areas are settling into cities to find better employment opportunities.
This
trend has several negative influences which are going to be discussed in the following paragraphs along with the solutions.
To begin
with,
this
new social change will produce tremendous stress and pressure in the job sector. As graduates are already facing fierce competition in the job market
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more people in the cities would intensify the situation. It is highly probable that the job recruiters would demand more from the applicants while selecting them for jobs
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which again give rise to a t
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atmosphere. Resultantly
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there would be more jobless graduates in the cities
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giving rise to u
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the unemployment problem
Secondly
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this
change will negatively affect the crop production and
hence
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nation's
economy. To elaborate
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if the workers from agricultural fields will move to the cities
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there would be l
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a lack
of effective manual workforce in the agricultural farms to carry out several farming practices.
This
will not only impair the quality of c
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crops, but
also
highly decrease their quantity.
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taking a long term perspective
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people may have to suffer from the lack of supply of food products
such
as wheat
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rice and others
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these all factors will adversely affect the national economy. Moving
further
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few measures can be suggested in order to reverse
this
problem.
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cost prices of crops should be increased. As currently farmers receive very little prices for their crops in the market
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which compels them to find jobs in factories or industries
instead
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increased cost f
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of
their crops would encourage them to continue with farming. Another solution has to come from reducing the prices of various fertilizers
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seeds and pesticides so that farmers can easily purchase them
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it can be reiterated that the trend of migration from non-urban areas to populated areas would cause severe consequences on the societies and nation as a whole.
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by taking some constructive solutions
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this
problem can be mitigated
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