We often hear that new technology presents a threat to our traditions. In what ways however can new technology help maintain our traditions?

In
this
contemporary era,
technology
is blooming in the air. It has become eminent across the globe. But, sometimes we hear from people that the latest
technology
threats our traditions.
However
, in
this
essay I will be discussing how newest
technology
has
impact
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an impact
on our traditions.
Firstly
, we must admit that
technology
has changed everyone’s life. Dramatic improvement in the companies and as well as at homes. Technologies like laptops, mobile phones, iPads and most importantly internet, all
this
have
Suggestion
has
its own effects on individuals in a better
way
.
This
shows
technology
has always improve our traditional values to a great extent.
For example
,
hand written
written by hand
handwritten
letters
has now been changed
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have now been changed
to emails, phone calls or video calls.
This
according to me gives a better experience.
Secondly
, as it’s often we hear that it can thread our traditions, which in my opinion is not true. Because new
technology
has
betterment
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bettered
from the old, old has its improvement from
the oldest
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the old
, in
this
way
our tradition is been
improving
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improved
massively.
This
is a great
honor
bestow honor or rewards upon
honour
.
For instance
, we can learn a lot about our past and tradition through
internet
Suggestion
the internet
. We can find all information at one go from just one website.
This
makes other people more knowledgeable about our traditions. Which in return keeps our traditional alive. And
also
provides great education for our future generation. In conclusion, it is very clear that in no
way
the
technology
is dominating our tradition
rather it’s
Accept comma addition
rather, it’s
has added more value and respect in a
newest
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new
newer
way
.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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