We often hear that new technology presents a threat to our traditions. In what ways however can new technology help maintain our traditions?

this

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contemporary era,

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is blooming in the air. It has become eminent across the globe. But, sometimes we hear from people that the latest

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threats our traditions.

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, in

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essay I will be discussing how newest

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has

impact

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an impact

on our traditions.

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, we must admit that

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has changed everyone’s life. Dramatic improvement in the companies and as well as at homes. Technologies like laptops, mobile phones, iPads and most importantly internet, all

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have

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has

its own effects on individuals in a better

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shows

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has always improve our traditional values to a great extent.

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hand written

written by hand

handwritten

letters

has now been changed

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have now been changed

to emails, phone calls or video calls.

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according to me gives a better experience.

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, as it’s often we hear that it can thread our traditions, which in my opinion is not true. Because new

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has

betterment

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bettered

from the old, old has its improvement from

the oldest

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the old

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way

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our tradition is been

improving

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improved

massively.

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is a great

honor

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, we can learn a lot about our past and tradition through

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the internet

. We can find all information at one go from just one website.

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makes other people more knowledgeable about our traditions. Which in return keeps our traditional alive. And

also

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provides great education for our future generation. In conclusion, it is very clear that in no

way

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the

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is dominating our tradition

rather it’s

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rather, it’s

has added more value and respect in a

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new

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

253 words

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Include an introduction and conclusion

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