Every country should have a free health service; even if that means that the latest medical treatments may not be available through this service because they are too expensive. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

Access to reliable and state of the art medical facilities is vital for the people of any country. Advancement in medical

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and technology has improved tremendously and thereby the cost has been dramatically increased over the

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few years and made it unaffordable for many people in the society.

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, it’s the government’s duty to provide free medical services for their citizens and I completely agree with

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statement. Hospitals are acting like a business centre nowadays, the reason behind

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is lack of quality medical

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at government hospitals. Private hospitals are utilizing

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chance to make more and more money, they are literally sucking the hard earned money from the people irrespective of their financial status. One good example is, the number of pregnant women undergoing c

aesarian

relating to abdominal delivery

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Caesarean

was increased manifold when compared to the

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decade. Though there are chances of delivering a baby normally, patients are forced to undergo for a surgery mentioning few medical terms just for the sake of increasing the bill amount. Every citizen of the country h

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has

the rights to get proper medical facilities as everyone pays t

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taxes

to the government. The tax should be better utilized to f

ulfill

put in effect

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the very basic need like shelter, food, education and medical rather than spending it for building statue, sending r

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rockets

etc. People under poverty line cannot afford expensive treatments like chemotherapy, dialysis etc. i

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they are not allowed for free

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reatment

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treatment, then

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they are going to die, which in turn, will show the government’s inability to protect their people.

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, people are more appreciative about the country which provides education and medical for free of cost.

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, every year the number of immigrants moving to Canada was increasing due to the fact that Canada is providing free education and medical services. To conclude, it is high time that authorities should work on to provide a world class medical facility to their citizens irrespective of the

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cost. P

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The proper budget

should be allocated to achieve

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