Both the poor and the rich find the accessibility into university difficult. Do you agree or disagree?

In todays modern

world many

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world, many

students are migrating to abroad for the purpose of studies.

However

, there are people who think that getting admission into university is demanding, despite their financial conditions. I strongly agree with the notion that admission in a university is difficult for both rich and the poor. Nowadays there is a demand for masters degree because of which students are migrating to other countries.

for

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For

a student to get admitted, there are some specific requirements. A student with a desired percentage can apply by qualifying the international

language

examinations like IELTS and TOEFL.Even after writing these examinations and during the application process the university gives

preferrence

a strong liking

preference

preferences

reference

to the native applicants not the

internationanl

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international

International

students, even though if they are financially strong.

Hence

, people who want to pursue their

further

studies find difficult due to the above reason.

Secondly

,

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,

language

also

plays a significant role when moving to a new country.

In other words

, people who have completed their education in a

non-english

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non-English

speaking country, these people find it difficult to understand.

For example

, Most of the universities in

america

North American republic containing 50 states - 48 conterminous states in North America plus Alaska in northwest North America and the Hawaiian Islands in the Pacific Ocean; achieved independence in 1776

America

and

germany

a republic in central Europe; split into East Germany and West Germany after World War II and reunited in 1990

Germany

, the lecturers speak in

a

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an

american

of or relating to the United States of America or its people or language or culture

American

accent and german

accent which

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accent, which

most of the

indian

a member of the race of people living in America when Europeans arrived

Indian

students are unable to grasp.To tackle

this

issue the students should undergo

language

certification courses which would help them to understand.

Therefore

, when moving to a different country and to understand their accent will require time. In conclusion, when people want to pursue their studies

abroad they

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abroad, they

will have to qualify examinations and

also

undergo

language

courses.

Eventthough

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Even though

Event though

they got qualified

,

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,

most of them find complex.