News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspapers. What factors do you think influence these decisions? Do we become use to bad news? Would it be better if more good news was reported.

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Mass media

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The mass media

usually serve the purpose of providing the public with happenings around the world. News editors

in particular

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are in pole position to determine which news to be

publish

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published

and televise in any media house.

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essay will discuss factors that

influenc

a power to affect persons or events especially power based on prestige etc

influence

influenced

their

decision including

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decision, including

news people what to hear and paid advert. It will

also

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discuss why broadcasting positive news will do more good that bad for the

society

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as well as

benefit

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the benefit

of reporting good news Trending issues in the

society

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has always attract

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have always attracted

the attention of news editors of media houses because it is what people have interest in and what they want to hear. It is more evident nowadays among editors that they prefer to print or report news relating to politics and entertainment.

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, media houses, as an industry, is

finance

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financed

with money.

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, it is highly important for editors to print out or publish

advert

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adverts

, articles just to mention a few from individuals, companies or politicians who are ready to pay for the service. For

instances

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instance

, during my routine

newspapers

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newspapers'

newspaper

newspaper's

review, what usually dominate headlines are popular issues around my localities and around the world, and

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in or at that place

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are

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lots

of sponsor

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posts

by editors.

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trending issues and paid advertisement greatly affect what editors post to public

dormain

a particular environment or walk of life

domain

domains

demand

. It is becoming a norm nowadays that negative news spread easily around the world compare to good news. The way media paint dejected news to enhance its popularity among people.

Majority

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The majority

of the people are always moody to bad news.

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was quite evident when Nigeria lost the

first

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lady during former president

olusegun

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Olusegun

obasanjo

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Obasanjo

regime. The whole country was in shamble for a period of time. It is

therefore

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important to promote reporting of good

new

information about recent and important events

news

rather than

otherwise

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. Broadcasting and publishing of news that a

beneficial

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benefit

to people will promote and bring out the best in them. It will promote happy

society

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, news about discovery of products that will make life easier for people will contribute to good

society

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Therefore promoting

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Therefore, promoting

good news report

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a good news report

will lead to more happy people in the

society

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. In conclusion, editors of news usually make

decision

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a decision

the decision

decisions

on the type of news to publish to public

dormain

a particular environment or walk of life

domain

domains

demand

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essay discussed determinant factors that influence the news they publish and

also

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discussed reasons people find it hard to cope with bad news as well benefits of broadcasting positive news.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspapers. What factors do you think influence these decisions? Do we become use to bad news? Would it be better if more good news was reported.

Your opinion

Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world.

Nowadays, children watch a lot of TV and play video games. However, some think that these activities are not beneficial for a child’s mental health. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that qualities of person needs to become a successful in today's world cannot be learn at university or similar academy institution to what action do you agree or disagree?

robots and artificial intelligence are being developed to replace humans in the workplace. why is this happening do you think this will have a positive or negative impact on society?