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There is a sports stadium near your house and each weekend large no of people come to watch sports which cause neihbourw and you disturbances. Write a letter E planning who are you and where you live. What is the problem. And suggest a solution for local council .

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Dear Sir/Madam, My name is [Your Name], and I reside on Kings Park Street, located near Greenwoods
Stadium
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. I am reaching out to bring to your attention the considerable disturbances our community faces each weekend
due to
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 the numerous sports events held at the
stadium
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. Primarily, the traffic congestion around the
stadium
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 becomes quite severe, with the narrow streets often becoming heavily gridlocked.
This
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 makes it exceedingly difficult for residents, including myself, to access our homes during event days.
Furthermore
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, the noise associated with the games, particularly during evening matches, can be quite disruptive, making it hard for families to relax and enjoy their time at home. I suggest the local council establish designated parking areas
further
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 away from residential neighbourhoods to mitigate congestion.
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, I recommend that the council work in collaboration with
stadium
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 management to consider the installation of sound barriers or enforce stricter noise regulations to significantly reduce disturbances for local residents. Thank you for your attention to
this
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 urgent matter. Sincerely, Ankush

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structure
Ensure there is a clear introduction and conclusion for a structured response.
clarity
Maintain focus on the key ideas discussed to avoid diluting the message.
coherence
Your letter has a clear and logical structure, making it easy to follow.
tone
You've used a suitable and formal tone throughout the letter.
paragraphing
The ideas are well-organized, each in its own paragraph.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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