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Parents give more freedom to their children nowadays than they do in the past. Is this a negative or positive development. Answer with reasons and personal experiences......

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It
is argue
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is argued
argues
 that parents in our contemporary time give excess liberty to their wards compared to the olds
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In my opinion excess liberty to their may be detrimental to the lives
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Obviously, freedom of children can get them exposed too early. It can as well make them less cautious and lack morals. On the one hand, there would be
unnessary exposure
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an unnecessary exposure
unnecessary exposure
 of the wards as no one monitors them, they might probably watch
ponograhy
 which is delicate for their minds, they can as well get involved in illicit drugs.All these can eventually become
habit
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a habit
 which is difficult to reverse. On the
second
 hand, it is popularly said that "Train up a child in the way he should go and he will not depart from it" A child who doesn't get adequate attention of the
guidian
a person who cares for persons or property
guardians
guidance
 might become so loose
such
 that he would not be cautious and lack morals. Most times
,
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,
when younger generation seems to be free without caution, they tend to use words as they feel not minding who they are addressing or don't feel remorse for whatever wrong they do
.
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 In conclusion, giving the children
unnessary
not necessary
unnecessary
 exposure or freedom can play an irreversible consequence in them
,
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especially getting them involved in early sexual consciousness through
ponograhy
 and other vices. It can as well made uncultured with will affect the relational atmosphere.
Therefore
, it is
negative influence
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a negative influence
 that freedom of parents to their Wards to
gives
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give
 back to them.
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