Some people think that people should choose their job based on income in order to provide security for their family. Do you think money is an important factor when choosing a job? What other factors should be considered?

Money is playing an important role in peoples’ life. Either You want to live a simple life or luxurious

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one life

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people think

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providing financial security to their

families

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family's

family

job should be chosen on income based. In my

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opinion, it's

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the same, but people

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think money should be

second

factor

first

, to love what they do as

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We will consider both people opinion and will try to make a conclusion. In My opinion, Salary based income is important.

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a monthly income will make you relax from family expenses, kids school fees, groceries

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bills etc

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bills, etc.

bills etc.

imagine you don’t have a fix wages

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you don’t know at the end of the month how you will overcome of these necessary life needs.

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while selecting an

employer there

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employer, there

are few things to look after like medical allowances, sick leave wages, pick and drop facilities

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studies intended to provide general knowledge and intellectual skills (rather than occupational or professional skills)

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are as important as the wages.

For example

, in my previous job I was admitted for 20 days in hospital

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I received my medical bills and twenty days pay as well from the company that was of course was beneficial

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if

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refers to the speaker or writer

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was depending only on

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the salary

that will be quite difficult to survive with illness.

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The end conclusion

of the discussion is

undoubtfully

money is important

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Choosing job to provide security for family, love what you do, changing your employer for better wages or to skip one employer to another company in all cases money has

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an important role

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