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Developments in technology have brought various environmental problems. Some believe that people need to live simpler lives to solve environmental problems. Others, however, believe technology is the way to solve these problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Technology
 has evolved with mankind. Since the stone age era, inventions have been ruling the world. With companies investing huge sums of money in new tech, let's not forget the impact of the same on the flora and fauna of the motherland. In
this
 essay we shall discuss if the boom in
technology
 has been a boon or a bane
for
Suggestion
of
 the world. The advent of
technology
 has introduced us to laptops
,
Accept space
,
computers
,
Accept space
,
smart phones
,
Accept space
,
 cars, headphones, speakers.
Technology
 has helped in solving environmental problems
such
 as waste water treatment
,
Accept space
,
 plastic recycling and biodegradable composting.
Technology
 has resulted in fuel efficient electric cars which results in less pollution. It has
also
 lead to energy conservation of the natural resources. Waste water treatment is effective in protecting the marine ecosystem
.
Accept space
.
 Low use of CFC in fridges and
ac
a radioactive element of the actinide series; found in uranium ores
Ac
AC
act
 has resulted in a lower impact on global warming. Technological advancement has only led to impact the environment. In conclusion,
technology
 only has brought environmental problems in the world. Inadvertently, we cannot ignore
technology
 but need to be aware of the problems it brings along.
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