Some people think that it is important to have a single language as an international official language others think that it will make it difficult to identify countries and cause a loss of culture.

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People are increasingly
overweighted
usually describes a large person who is fat but has a large frame to carry it
overweight
in recent time. What factors do you think are responsible.How can
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be addressed. The rate at which individuals are predisposed to adding too much fat is on a rise
of
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in
recent. Several human practice and way of life are the cause:
such
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as our eating habits, exercise pattern, diet, inactivity and
also
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genetics Lifestyle changes and modifications on what people consume can help reduce
this
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burden.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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