Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?
These days online shopping
became
very popular. So, some Wrong verb form
has become
people
prefer to buy from the internet
, while
others believe that it is not safe. This
essay will discuss both sides and will draw my personal conclusion. In
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On
one
hand, time is important for everyone, So some Correct article usage
the one
people
do not have the time to do
shopping Correct your spelling
go
from
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in
the
shops and Correct article usage
apply
the
Correct article usage
apply
stores
. For example
, most shops nowadays close at eight o'clock while
online stores
are open in
every time and in every day. And all Change preposition
at
what
you need is an Change the word
that
internet
network while
shopping from the real stores
might cost some transportation costs. So, thats
why some Correct your spelling
that's
people
think that buying from the internet
is the best. Capitalize word
Internet
On the other hand
, the internet
has spread a lot in the last
years
. And many Correct quantifier usage
few years
of
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apply
websites
and online stores
are available today. But
one research has Correct word choice
However
made
in Maastricht University about the Add a missing verb
been made
fakes
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fake
websites
. They found that from ten regular online websites store
there is one irregular online shop. These fake Fix the agreement mistake
website stores
websites
might steal the credit cards
information if someone bought from them. Change the noun form
card
Hence
the belief that online shops are not safe. In
addition
80% of USA Add a comma
addition,
people
use the internet
to buy most of the things they need without thinking of whether is it safe or not. To illustrate, they buy from the
known Correct article usage
apply
websites
such
as Amazon and Bool. This
proves clearly that most of the people
trust to buy from the internet
. In conclusion, after a careful analysis of both point
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points
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of view
view
I believe that the positives of online shopping Add a comma
view,
outweighed
the negatives.Wrong verb form
outweigh
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion