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Some people think that going to a fitness centre regularly is unnecessary. Instead, they believe that combining occasional exercise (such as going for walks) with a balanced diet is enough to stay healthy. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Dear Friend, It's
my
objective form of "I"
me
 glad to write a
latter
a written message addressed to a person or organization
letter
 to you after a long
time
 since we
mate
a meeting at which a number of athletic contests are held
met
. There is a lot change in my life since we
mate
a meeting at which a number of athletic contests are held
met
. Now a days I am a software developer in a MNC in Chennai. I am staying with my family. Anyway the main purpose of
this
latter
a written message addressed to a person or organization
letter
 I am writing to you is that I am planing to visit in your country with my
faimily
a social unit living together
family
 on 20
days
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day
 trip. I am so excited to meet you, I know I
have not talk
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have not talked
 to you from long
time
.
Actually I
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Actually, I
 was busy with my family. As you know being a family man is more
responsbility
the social force that binds you to the courses of action demanded by that force
responsibility
responsibilities
 on a single
man that's
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man, that's
 why I couldn't connect
to
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with
 you for
long
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a long time
time
. The main
moto
a favorite saying of a sect or political group
motto
 of my trip to your county is that I got an offer from my current company for travel visa with family.
Hence I
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Hence, I
 have selected a county in which you are staying. Because of
this
 I can meet you since it has been
long
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a long time
time
 to see you. I have booked the
hote
a building where travelers can pay for lodging and meals and other services
hotel
 Canada Home once I am there I have some plan like I will be going to nearest best place everyday morning
for
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to
 walk.

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    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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