After being involved in an accident, you were rescued by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude. In your letter: 1) Introduce yourself and let him/her know why you're writing 2) Express your appreciation 3) Request to pay him/her to visit.

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Dear Sir, I am writing to express my profound gratitude for your selfless act of saving my life

last

week on Tuesday. My name is Aminu Janet, the lady you saved from the kidnappers recently. I woke up on my hospital bed Wednesday night and was told by the nurses that you single handedly called the cops on that sad day. After that revelation, I took it as a mission to look for you and I am glad I was able to get in touch with you.

Although

I am still in shock as to the events of that day, I am really grateful to you for saving my life and preventing any

further

harm that could have occurred but for your timely intervention. If I am not asking for too much, I would love to pay you a visit once I am discharged from the hospital. Please, would you be kind enough to reply with the details of your present location? I look forward to a positive response. Yours faithfully, Aminu Janet.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

173 words

4.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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