General Training Task 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You plan to do some traveling in a few months. You would like to visit an old friend who lives in another country. You haven’t spoken to this friend in a few years. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: - Provide a short update about your life since you saw him/her last - Explain why you will be traveling to his/her city - Say what you would like to do when you visit his/her city

Dear Friend, I am so excited to meet you in several months. I have arranged a trip with my family to Canada. I am feeling happy to write a letter to you after a long while since we met. There are a lot of changes
happened
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that happened
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in my life from the day we met. When you were here that I just passed graduation and seeking
for
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a job. Now I am a software developer in a good MNC
on
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in
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big
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position.
Anyway
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the main purpose of
this
letter I am writing to you is that I am
planing
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planning
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to visit
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your country with my family on
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a 20
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20 day
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trip. I am so excited to meet you, I know I have not talked to you
from
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long a while. Actually, I was a bit busy with family. As
you
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areyou
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aware, being a family man is more responsibility on a single man, that's why I couldn't connect with you for a long time. Anyway, leave all the things, it's great Meetup with you. I got offered some fund from my current company for travel visa with family.
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, I have selected a county in which you are staying as of now. Because of
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I can meet you since it has been a long time to see you. I have booked the hotel "Canada Home" once I am there I have
some
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a great plan. I will describe you soon.
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