Some people think that more money should be spent on protecting endangered species while others think it is a waste of valuable money. What is your opinion?

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These days, the number of endangered

species

are progressingly

Suggestion

is progressing

are progressing

increasing worldwide,

threby

by that means or because of that

thereby

it requires us to increase our

effortss

earnest and conscientious activity intended to do or accomplish something

efforts

to protect them. While it is possible, spending more

money

can lead to a better outcome, it is likely for

money

to be more urgent across other sectors.

This

essay will discuss why protecting endangered

species

should be one of the top priorities no matter the cost. Mans lifestyle changes over the years

have lead

Suggestion

have led

to many animal

species

to go extinct;

therefore

, humans have the responsibility in protecting the endangered

species

and maintaining the biodiversity of the world. The survival of

human race

Suggestion

the human race

is dependent on the existence of many

species

For example

, it is

beleived

accept as true; take to be true

believed

that the extinction of killer bees will ultimately lead to the extinction of human being. For

this

reason, we must increase our efforts to ensure the survival of endangered

species

Conversely

, the need of

money

is felt across many sectors, some of which being more urgent than the protection of endangered

species

. With

growing population

Suggestion

a growing population

the growing population

, the

isssue

prepare and issue for public distribution or sale

issue

issues

powerty

the state of having little or no money and few or no material possessions

poverty

and hunger is one of the main concerns that affects

wide range

Suggestion

a wide range

of people.

Money

could

therefore

be spent into these urgent matters in order to better the life of

human race

Suggestion

the human race

For instance

, there are increasing number of projects in Africa in order to supply clean water for them. For these reasons, we must carefully consider how to utilise valuable

money

. The protection of endangered

species

is increasingly in need for more

money

. More expenditure can ensure a better outcome in terms of survival of these

species

;

however

, the need for

money

will be felt more across other sectors. Ultimately, despite the high cost,

human race

Suggestion

the human race

has the responsibility in protecting all animal

species

in the world.

Sun Sep 22 2019

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

293 words

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Some people think that more money should be spent on protecting endangered species while others think it is a waste of valuable money. What is your opinion?

Include an introduction and conclusion

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