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Some people believe that information should be free and available to anyone. Others believe that certain business and research information is too valuable to be shared freely and instead should be sold. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

#people #information #anyone #business #research
Every individual
have
Suggestion
has
 their own prospective. The way the person thinks diverse from each other. Many mankind thinks, what all the
information
their
people in general
they
 want should get them free. And many thinks all
information
 is not easy to share. In
this
 essay I would be giving views and will be giving my opinion after addressing both the views. Let us start with the individuals who really thinks, one should get the
information
their
people in general
they
 need for free. As these days we all can find basic
information
 related to our daily lives. It could be
information
 on Health, Education, Society and many government related
information
. We usually get
this
 for free on social network sites and on Google. So, basically we are taking advantage of
this
 free
information
 and we all utilize that in our daily lives.
This
 is quite beneficial to all mankind. When we see the other side of
this
 discussion, we can
analyze
consider in detail and subject to an analysis in order to discover essential features or meaning
analyse
 that all
information
 cannot get for free. Because sharing all
information
 it’s not easy and it has its known values. Especially the
information
 on business and research can’t be given just. As it has its own value and can only be sold.
For instance
, one can find free
information
 on as simple as weight loss, but to start with proper guidelines the one need to meet dietician or by taking proper course, where an individual need to pay.
On the other hand
, when it comes to study all research
information
 you cannot find for free.
Person
Suggestion
A person
The person
 has to read
plethora
Suggestion
the plethora
a plethora
 of books to do their proper research. Where there will be using
library
Suggestion
the library
 and other sold books. In conclusion, I want to state that everything in
this
era
a particular geographical region of indefinite boundary (usually serving some special purpose or distinguished by its people or culture or geography)
area
 cannot get for free. What all
information
 available in
this
 contemporary era for free is more enough for an
individuals
Suggestion
individual
. But, one’s has to pay in order to get the
information
 which has its own value.
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