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Wealthy countries should accept more refugees and provide them with basic assistance, such as food and housing. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

#countries #refugees #assistance #food
It is argued that developed countries should allow more evacuees to enter their borders and give them primary support,
such
 as
food
 and shelter. The essay agrees with
this
 statement because rich countries are capable enough to support these kind of people. Elite states have an abundant
food
 supply for their citizens. The American people have estimated that 30% of their
food
 has been thrown every day.
Instead
 of wasting, why don't share these supply to those people who needs it. Sharing some of our blessing and giving a hand to others, is a nice thing for an individual to do.
In
Suggestion
At
 the end of the day, it is
ourbduty
 to help one another because
that is
 what God wants us to do (having a quality of being human). In fact, the United States of America
alloted
subject to popular election
elected
 one fourth of its budget for refugees. Another point to consider is that rich nations have wide areas for deportees to construct its homes. Countries who
has
Suggestion
have
 extra land space
was develop
Suggestion
developed
 for the population who are fleeing from their respective country due to the lack of
food
 supply and famine. In Australia, only one
third
 of its territory has been occupied by immigrants, so there is still a big space for the non immigrants to build their house.
This
 cannot affect to their economy because the government has sufficient budget for everybody. In conclusion, affluent states should welcome everyone who needs basic assistance. With
this
, people can preserve the value of humanity and wealthy nations are able to help the refugees.
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    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Refugees
  • Asylum seekers
  • Humanitarian aid
  • Integration
  • Multiculturalism
  • Economic impact
  • Public services
  • International law
  • Conventions relating to the status of refugees
  • Labor market
  • Cultural enrichment
  • Burden-sharing
  • Resettlement programs
  • Host country
  • Border security
  • Comprehensive policy
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