he percentage of people travel by bus in UK. To that extent do you agree with this statement?

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given
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table chart illustrates the
numbers
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number
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of
people
who used the
bus
for travelling in the United Kingdom from the
year
2009 to 2011. Given data is calibrated in
percentage
.
Overall
, for all the years
maximum
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a maximum
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number of pupils, preferred buses for shopping purposes and
lesser
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a lesser
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number of
people
took
this
means of transportation for going to work. In 2009, 65%
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of people's
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people's
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people
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took
bus
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a bus
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for shopping, but
this
percentage
dropped to 56% in the
year
2010 and later
on
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on,
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this
percentage
again fell to 51%. But,
still
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still,
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more than half
people
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of people
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preferred buses for shopping
purpose
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purposes
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in all the given years. Only 5%
people
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of people
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took
bus
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a bus
the bus
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for going
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to work in the
year
2009 and again
this
percentage
decreased from 2% in the
year
2010 to 0%
at the end
of the
year
.
Percentage
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The percentage
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of
people
travelled
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by
bus
for study and day
tour
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tours
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increased from 4% to 9% and 7% to 12% respectively from the
year
2009 to
year
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the year
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2011. In the
year
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years
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2009 and 2010, 19%
people
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of people
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took
bus
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the bus
a bus
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in order to
visiting
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visit
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their
friends
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friend's
friends'
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homes, but later on
this
percentage
increased by 4% and reached 23%.
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