he percentage of people travel by bus in UK. To that extent do you agree with this statement?

The given table chart illustrates the numbers of people who used the bus for travelling in the United Kingdom from the
year
2009 to 2011. Given data
is calibrated
Suggestion
are calibrated
in
percentage
. Overall, for all the years maximum number of pupils, preferred buses for shopping purposes and lesser number of people took
this
means of transportation for going to work. In 2009, 65% people's took
bus
Suggestion
a bus
the bus
for shopping, but
this
percentage
dropped to 56% in the
year
2010 and later on
this
percentage
again fell to 51%. But, still more than half people preferred buses for shopping purpose in all the given years. Only 5% people took
bus
Suggestion
a bus
the bus
for going to work in the
year
2009 and again
this
percentage
decreased from 2% in the
year
2010 to 0% at the end of the
year
.
Percentage
Suggestion
The percentage
of people travelled by bus for study and day tour increased from 4% to 9% and 7% to 12% respectively from the
year
2009 to
year
Suggestion
the year
2011. In the
year
2009 and 2010, 19% people took bus in order to
visiting
Suggestion
visit
their
friends
Suggestion
friends'
homes, but later on
this
percentage
increased by 4% and reached 23%.
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