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In many countries, people are moving away from rural areas and towards urban areas. Why do you think that is? What problems can this cause?

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Nowadays, numerous nations are experiencing
phenomenal shift
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a phenomenal shift
 of people moving from small towns to developed cities.
This
 is happening due to the fact that, people are striving to achieve
better standard
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a better standard
better standards
 of living by opting to diverse opportunity to
work
 that
originate
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originates
originated
 concerns like competition for
work
. It is irrefutable that people often move out of their hometown in order to take up their preferred job from a wide range of opportunities available in the city.
This
 would not only benefit them
financially but
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financially, but
also
 let them learn or upgrade skills at
work
 with latest methodologies.
Moreover
, financial freedom
let
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lets
 people enjoy the life and, at the same time, improvised
work
 experience pushes them forward in their career.
On the other hand
, more people moving to certain urban cities to seek employment make it more competitive for them to secure a job as more qualified people would be available to take up the same
work
. It is obvious that living cost of big cities
are
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is
 quite high and every person needs to
work
 in order to pay his or her bills every month. Since the number of opportunity
are
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is
 usually
limited but
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limited, but
 applicants increase with time, keep the situation competitive. All being said, human who wants a better quality of
work
 usually move out of their native place and to big cities to taste the global job opportunities available there. Since the cost of living is high in metro cities, every person needs to earn their expenses
hence
 it create a competitive situation for both native and immigrants.
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