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Sample Questions and Band 9 Model Answers For more information and help with your IELTS test visit- IELTSAdvantage.com The graph above shows the stock price of four technology companies between 2011 and 2016. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Sample Questions and Band 9 Model Answers For more information and help with your IELTS test visit- IELTSAdvantage.com The graph above shows the stock price of four technology companies between 2011 and 2016. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph shown is a bar graph representing the
stock
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 prices of 4 companies namely, Facebook, Google, Apple and Yahoo through the
rears
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years
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 2011 to 2016. Both Facebook and Yahoo have approximately similar
stock
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 values of approximately 7,000 in the
year
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 2011.
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, the
stock
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value
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 of Facebook increased steadily to about 20,000,
while
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in contrast
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, the
stock
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value
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 of Yahoo decreased steadily
with
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every
year
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 to about 2,000 in 2016. Apple started off with a
stock
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value
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 of approximately 4,900 in the
year
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 2011.
This
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stock
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value
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 increased exponentially to more than 30,000 in the following
year
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. In 2013,
however
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, the
stock
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value
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 of Apple plummeted to a mere 5,500 and in 2014 the
stock
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value
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 went up to
approximate
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 11,000 and kept fluctuating to a final
value
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 of approximately 5,100 in the
year
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 2016. The
stock
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value
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 of Google,
in contrast
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 to the other 3 companies remained almost constant from 2011 to 2016 with a
stock
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value
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 of approximately 1,000.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however, in contrast".
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words stock, year, value with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "go" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "go" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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