Technology is becoming increasingly prevalent in the modern world. In the not too distant future, technology will completely replace teacher in the classroom. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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At present

techonology

the practical application of science to commerce or industry

technology

wastly

to an exceedingly great extent or degree

vastly

developing in the

world

and lot of sectors are impact on

this

in many ways

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due to new softwares soon classrooms are replaced by teachers

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I will

aruge

present reasons and arguments

argue

urge

arrange

that how

techonology

the practical application of science to commerce or industry

technology

overcome the professors in the university.

Firstly

, nowadays everyone is

intersted

having or showing interest; especially curiosity or fascination or concern

interested

to learn new things but same

time whatever

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time, whatever

teachers are saying in the room is not sufficient to the

competative

involving competition or competitiveness

competitive

world

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world, hence

hence

everyone

intersted

having or showing interest; especially curiosity or fascination or concern

interested

entrusted

to seeking from

Youtube

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YouTube

and Application

therefore

most of the young students are not

intersted

having or showing interest; especially curiosity or fascination or concern

interested

to go to college,

moreover

due to

this

students

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student

can understand the subject easily and they can't depend on

any one

any person

anyone

however

several countries like Nepal and Bali don't have any schools and through

this

they can easily learning subjects

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For Example

, In developing countries like India and Brazil most of the people are learning through online and the online classroom demand is increased a lot and almost 25% revenue generating through

this

Secondly

, currently all the major universities are

started

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starting

online

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an online class, hence

an online class hence

class

hence

world

wide students can learn new things in their fingertips and getting

certificate easily

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certificate, easily

, on the top that due to

this

class

major benefit is fees reduced in many ways like

tution

a fee paid for instruction (especially for higher education)

tuition

fee,

cost

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the cost

of the course and travel cost. Another benefit to students for

this

courses like

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course, like

course like

they can understand that at

this

moment

which

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Which

course is in demand on the market

therefore

they can choose that.

For Instance

As per the latest CNN

survery

consider in a comprehensive way

survey

recently Oxford university started online

class

and they have huge

demanad

request urgently and forcefully

demand

world

wide due to

this

many

importent

of great significance or value

important

things are reaching to normal people. In Conclusion, as a

globalization many

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globalization, many

new things can learn from home

therefore

online

class

most famous in the market and they are several benefits for

this

like amount reduced while fees and learning other languages from home without paying

exta

more than is needed, desired, or required

extra

money.

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prevalent
interactive tools
human interaction
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personalized learning
democratizing education
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critical thinking
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