Having more money and less free time is better than earning less money and having more free time. Discuss both views and state your opinion

Some people believe that earning more

money

is more essential than having

free

Suggestion

freer

hours, while others think that having more free

time

is more important than a good

financila

involving financial matters

financial

status. In my opinion,

although

money

can solve most of our basic problems, human's requirements are not limited to

money

as we

also

need to socialize and strengthen our relations to feel happy and that requires more spare

time

. It is thought that

money

is the most important factor in our life as it can enormously affect our family's life. If one of our family members has a health problem, the

first

solution would be searching for the best health

center

an area that is approximately central within some larger region

centre

with professional doctors. Staying at home and spending more

time

with them would not make them better and cure them.

Therefore

, the whole process may cost a lot, so people need enough

money

to cover their necessities.

On the other hand

, some other people consider that without having enough free

time

to spend with family we will lose our motivation for improvement. Families who spend reasonable

time

together can build strong relations and that would motivate them to continue their activities and improve. I am a teacher and based on my observations those students who spend most of their spare

time

with their parents are considerably happier and more motivated than those who spend

time

with their babysitters as their parents work 9 to 5 every day. To conclude,

although

the more we

earn the

Accept comma addition

earn, the

better we cover ours and our family's basic demands, I believe that we need to build strong relations with our family and without it, we and our family members would become sad and

demotivated

so it is important to take enough

time

to spend with family.