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Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person’s culture and character from their choice dressing. Do you agree or disagree?

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Often it is believed that layer of cloth over a person’s skin can reveal a lot about a person’s background and personality. As human, we get to choose what we decide to wear and more often than not it aligns with our identity. I am a firm believer that a person’s dressing sense is highly influenced by a variety of factors
such
 as
one
’s traditions, profession, and ideologies among others things. The dress people choose to wear
disclose
Suggestion
to disclose
 a lot more about
one
’s upbringing that
one
 they believe. Despite tradition having an impact on
one
’s choice of style in
early years
Suggestion
the early years
, surroundings while growing up has a bigger impact on
one
’s attire opening up the windows to
one
’s ideology.
For example
,
one
 will find people from tier 1 and 2 cities wearing western clothes
such
 as jeans, trousers; tee-shirts compared to those from towns who are majorly seen wearing traditional attires. Apart from culture and
surrounding
the environmental condition
surroundings
, individual characteristics plays an even bigger role.
In other words
, the personality of persons gets reflected in the dress on wear.
For example
,
one
 will find introverts dressing sense to be more subtle and calm
in contrast
 to extroverts who tend to wear clothes that demands attention
Additionally
, the
color
a visual attribute of things that results from the light they emit or transmit or reflect
colour
one
generally tend
Suggestion
generally tends
 to wear
also
 plays a huge role in the disclosing the personality traits.
This
 can be
evidently
Suggestion
evidenced
 seen in people involved in serious business who generally wear monotonous solid colours
such
 as black and blues in comparison to more colourful actors and actresses. In conclusion, I would reinstate that I agree that
one
’s dressing is highly influenced by
one
’s
surrounding
the environmental condition
surroundings
 with culture and individual character playing a significant role.

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