You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic. Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

Thoughts about advertising. 
 
 Recently I started to pay attention on the amount of ads that are around us all day. It
is clearly costing
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clearly cost
lot
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lots
of money to create
this ads
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this ad
these ads
, so there should be good reason behind
,
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,
I thought. I started to talk about it with my friends and noticed that there are 2 main answers. 
 Half of my friends
sayid
being the one previously mentioned or spoken of
said
that it is not bothering them at all and that they are actually getting new information from ads. The other half thinks that ads are putting pressure on the to buy things they don’t really need. And that it is harder for them to not get
items
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the items
that had nice catchy ads. 
 I think that advertisement clearly is making a difference, it is indeed encouraging people to get things, for some things that they do not need.
First because
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First, because
they would not make those ads if it was not effective and
second
I felt it on my own skin so to speak. When I
for
example go
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example, go
for a regular daily shopping I notice that I am more keen to get things that I am
familiar
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more familiar
with rather than the ones I never heard of.
For
example when
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example, when
my old phone
finally
died I
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died, I
went for phone shopping and seller was trying to convince me to get
this
Indian made phone which on paper had clearly way better
params
make a promise or commitment
promise
premise
poems
, and felt faster
on
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to
use
to
to a degree exceeding normal or proper limits
too
, but I was steel leaning towards well known familiar brands that I have seen in the ads.

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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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