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Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programs (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sport to younger children).

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Whether or not to hire high schoolers in jobs benefiting
community
 without paying them is a highly debated subject. I partially agree with the idea of giving the youngsters a compulsory career opportunity to working for the
community
 for free. Working for the society they live in, teenagers could develop many skills. When a teenager is hired, they are given
list
Suggestion
a list
lists
 of tasks to accomplish; the process completing the list of chores would instill, the sense responsibility as well as
sense
Suggestion
a sense
the sense
 of being beneficial to their
community
 and improving it to be a better place to inhabit.
Moreover
, they may learn how to be a good teammate. Running charities,
for example
, adolescents experience achieving real means,
such
 as raising
significant amount
Suggestion
a significant amount
significant amounts
 of money by cooperating with other members of the team in selling items or advertising their goals. There are,
however
, drawbacks. For one thing, not all students are able to make time for working extra hours without being paid since they are already busy doing part-time paid jobs to save for higher education or simply paying for their current expenses. More importantly, the good cause does hinder students’
education
Suggestion
educational
 progress. While communal jobs accelerate the quality of life in a region, those jobs might halt average students needing more time to practice for school assignments.
Therefore
, it does not seem the best idea for unpaid
work
 to be compulsory for all students in high schools. To conclude, I contend that free
community
 service could be offered by teenagers as
complementary task
Suggestion
a complementary task
 in which they substantially improve their
work place
a place where work is done
workplace
 experience and team
work
 ability;
however
, it is not possible for all to
work
 extra free hours.

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