Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programs (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sport to younger children).

Whether or not to hire high schoolers in jobs benefiting
community
without paying them is a highly debated subject. I partially agree with the idea of giving the youngsters a compulsory career opportunity to working for the
community
for free. Working for the society they live in, teenagers could develop many skills. When a teenager is hired, they are given
list
Suggestion
a list
lists
of tasks to accomplish; the process completing the list of chores would instill, the sense responsibility as well as
sense
Suggestion
a sense
the sense
of being beneficial to their
community
and improving it to be a better place to inhabit.
Moreover
, they may learn how to be a good teammate. Running charities,
for example
, adolescents experience achieving real means,
such
as raising
significant amount
Suggestion
a significant amount
significant amounts
of money by cooperating with other members of the team in selling items or advertising their goals. There are,
however
, drawbacks. For one thing, not all students are able to make time for working extra hours without being paid since they are already busy doing part-time paid jobs to save for higher education or simply paying for their current expenses. More importantly, the good cause does hinder students’
education
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educational
progress. While communal jobs accelerate the quality of life in a region, those jobs might halt average students needing more time to practice for school assignments.
Therefore
, it does not seem the best idea for unpaid
work
to be compulsory for all students in high schools. To conclude, I contend that free
community
service could be offered by teenagers as
complementary task
Suggestion
a complementary task
in which they substantially improve their
work place
a place where work is done
workplace
experience and team
work
ability;
however
, it is not possible for all to
work
extra free hours.

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