Write a letter to a friend about an upcoming event in your town. What the event is Why they would be interested An invitation to stay with you

Dear James, I hope you are doing splendidly! It's been so long time since we saw each other and I have been thinking about you a lot and wanted to shoot you a message

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an invitation to the compelling concert called ''Korean K concert'' which is going to be held next week on Thursday night in my hometown. To commence with, I wanted to remind you that

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is the same concert that we experienced in grade 8, and

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fascinating news about

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event is that they are going to perform after several years , I believe almost after 10 years which is a long period of time. Since

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it is rumoured that seats are very limited and bookings are open till

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week only, I have decided to purchase two tickets for the event before it's all gone.

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, your favourite celebrity name Salman Khan is coming as a chief guest, it is a spectacular and golden chance to see him live.

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, It would be more convenient for you if you stayed with me and my family

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event, we shall have a great time together and

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recall our past nostalgic memories and can make our day more memorable with lots of fun and gossip. Waiting eagerly to meet you again, yours lovingly, Ravi

raavibhullar2002Fri May 30 2025

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Consider breaking up some of the longer sentences for clarity. Each idea can be expressed more clearly in simpler sentences.

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Add a clear reason for why the concert is special and how it relates to your friend's interests.

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The friendly greeting and closing create a warm tone in the letter.

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You have included an invitation, which meets the requirements of the task.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

220 words

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Write a letter to a friend about an upcoming event in your town. What the event is Why they would be interested An invitation to stay with you

Some people say that the governments should pay for health care and education but others think that this is not the government's responsibility. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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