Some people claim that museums and art galleries are not needed today because everyone can see historical objects or art works by computer. Do you agree or disagree?

Museums and art galleries are astonishing places that have a fascinating
things
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thing
related to history. Some individuals argue that these are not imperative today as everyone see past objects on
internet
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the internet
. I disagree with
this
statement and discussed in below paragraphs.
First
of all, it is true that due to modernization everything is easily available on
internet but
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the internet, but
the internet but
it is not the way to express the true feelings and emotions of objects.
In addition
, museums and art galleries are sources of income for numerous persons
.
Accept space
.
Many people achieve success to show their hidden potential in these places. These places are stepping
stone
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stones
to accomplish the desire for many individuals. So, it is important to preserve them
instead
of destroy.
Furthermore
, these are the most
tourisr
someone who travels for pleasure
tourist
attraction places and better for our upcoming generation to get in touch with their culture because computer is not provided the feeling of sightseeing.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • virtual
  • digital
  • online
  • accessibility
  • inclusivity
  • cultural heritage
  • physical experience
  • immersion
  • local tourism
  • economy
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