Some government say how many children a family can have in their country. They may control the number of children someone has through taxes. It is sometimes necessary and right for a government to control the population in this way. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons to your answer.

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Family planning has been become i
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becoming
ingly popular in these modern days. Certain nations limit people with having only two children by using tax policies since it is a government’s necessity and right to
control
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the human
population
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by the above method.
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essay will argue that why it is necessary for government to adopt a way to limit
population
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and its positive impact on the land. It is obvious for national leaders to adopt taxation
method in orde
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the taxation method
taxation methods
r to
control
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the
country
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’s
population
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.
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, to reduce the shortage of
food
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supply as the increase in number of citizens will give rise to vital pr
oblem
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the vital problem
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as supply of basic needs which includes
food
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, clothing and shelter. As many people survive in a
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it is diff
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country, it
icult task for nati
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of
to supply equal basic necessities of life because every
country
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has its own financial position where some are developed and some falls under-developed. Rich countries may have rich supply b
ut the poo
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supply, but
r countries will fail to meet the requirements of public.
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the public
stance, in India people in rural sector does not have a proper housing facility since th
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te comes under the list of developing
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countries
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, to provide proper placements to people who are in search of jobs because jobs will be the
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challenge faced by the state every year since many graduates comes out of the universities who will go in search of opportunities to get a position according to their qualification. Higher number of graduates and lesser positions will give rise to unemployment hurdles as it a toughest
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tough
tougher
aced by many states due to lack of balance in supply,
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will have negative
impact on mini
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a negative impact
stry. Overall, it is necessary for law to
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its
population
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to have a balanced
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over its homeland. Admittedly, controlling homeland’s
population
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has positives aside.
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with,
food
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is basic ne
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a basic need
the basic need
y human being and it is difficult to survive without a proper
food
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. Some ministry has been investing more on its imports to have a proper supply of
food
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to society
even though
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society, even
it is exporting its goods to foreign countries the cash outflow is more when compared to its inflow.
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is a reason for some states to be named as a developing nation because of its unbalanced nature. In
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case, if taxes are imposed to limit
population
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money spent on importing goods can be cut off as much as possible and can used for other developments in the society.
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, according to the talent jobs can be shared to peopl
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with
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people, which
t only worth for public b
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the public, but
the public but
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for
country
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as there would not be any migration to foreign countries as
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provides a chance for politics to make use of inside talents rather than sending them to foreign companies for placements.
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, many people who are graduated leave their motherland and move abroad in search of opportunities as they fail to do so in their own land. Overall, a government enjoy bo
th in
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enjoys
financial benefit along with wonderful inside talents available. In conclusion, some countries have a made a law in tax to reduce the growing
population
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to have a balanced society. It seems to me that limiting numbers in a family will not only reduce the family burden but
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its states as well. If the ministry would not have been made
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decision in connection with
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on it would f
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population, it
ace a serious issue in future.
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the future

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