Some government say how many children a family can have in their country. They may control the number of children someone has through taxes. It is sometimes necessary and right for a government to control the population in this way. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons to your answer.

Family planning has been become i
ncreas
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becoming
ingly popular in these modern days. Certain nations limit people with having only two children by using tax policies since it is a government’s necessity and right to
control
the human
population
by the above method.
This
essay will argue that why it is necessary for government to adopt a way to limit
population
and its positive impact on the land. It is obvious for national leaders to adopt taxation
method in orde
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the taxation method
taxation methods
r to
control
the
country
’s
population
.
Firstly
, to reduce the shortage of
food
supply as the increase in number of citizens will give rise to vital pr
oblem
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the vital problem
such
as supply of basic needs which includes
food
, clothing and shelter. As many people survive in a
country
it is diff
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country, it
icult task for nati
on
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of
to supply equal basic necessities of life because every
country
has its own financial position where some are developed and some falls under-developed. Rich countries may have rich supply b
ut the poo
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supply, but
r countries will fail to meet the requirements of public.
For in
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the public
stance, in India people in rural sector does not have a proper housing facility since th
e sta
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for
te comes under the list of developing
country
.
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countries
In addition
, to provide proper placements to people who are in search of jobs because jobs will be the
next
challenge faced by the state every year since many graduates comes out of the universities who will go in search of opportunities to get a position according to their qualification. Higher number of graduates and lesser positions will give rise to unemployment hurdles as it a toughest
issue f
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tough
tougher
aced by many states due to lack of balance in supply,
this
will have negative
impact on mini
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a negative impact
stry. Overall, it is necessary for law to
control
its
population
to have a balanced
control
over its homeland. Admittedly, controlling homeland’s
population
has positives aside.
To begin
with,
food
is basic ne
ed of ever
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a basic need
the basic need
y human being and it is difficult to survive without a proper
food
. Some ministry has been investing more on its imports to have a proper supply of
food
to society
even though
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society, even
it is exporting its goods to foreign countries the cash outflow is more when compared to its inflow.
This
is a reason for some states to be named as a developing nation because of its unbalanced nature. In
this
case, if taxes are imposed to limit
population
money spent on importing goods can be cut off as much as possible and can used for other developments in the society.
Furthermore
, according to the talent jobs can be shared to peopl
e
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with
w
hich will no
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people, which
t only worth for public b
ut
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the public, but
the public but
also
for
country
as there would not be any migration to foreign countries as
this
provides a chance for politics to make use of inside talents rather than sending them to foreign companies for placements.
For example
, many people who are graduated leave their motherland and move abroad in search of opportunities as they fail to do so in their own land. Overall, a government enjoy bo
th in
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enjoys
financial benefit along with wonderful inside talents available. In conclusion, some countries have a made a law in tax to reduce the growing
population
to have a balanced society. It seems to me that limiting numbers in a family will not only reduce the family burden but
also
its states as well. If the ministry would not have been made
this
decision in connection with
populati
on it would f
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population, it
ace a serious issue in future.
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the future

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