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some people think its better to choose friends who always have the same openion as them. Other people believe its good to have friends who some time disagree with them. Discuss both these views and give your own openion.

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Some of the people
belive
accept as true; take to be true
believe
believed
believes
 that friends
neith
negation of a word or group of words
not
 exactly the
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openion
a personal belief or judgment that is not founded on proof or certainty
opinion
opinions
opening
 on different topics are better than the once that can argue with them. On the one hand, having
similer
marked by correspondence or resemblance
similar
 interests on hobbies is a reason to start a friendship. In
this
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 case people always have something to discuss. If your
friend
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 has the same view
nof
quantifier; used with either mass nouns or plural count nouns for indicating a complete or almost complete lack or zero quantity of
no
 particular problem as you do
,
Accept space
,
 he can
heip
give help or assistance; be of service
help
 you to find a solution faster.
Such
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friend wii
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friend, we
friend we
 always
suporet
give moral or psychological support, aid, or courage to
support
 you and take
side
Suggestion
sides
 in any argument. He will be there for you in any situation.
On the other hand
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, having
equal
Suggestion
an equal opinion
equal opinion
equal opinions
equal opening
openion
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 with
you
of you or yourself
your
friend
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 is some
time boring
Suggestion
boring time
.You always
agreeon
Suggestion
agree on
 every issue with each other and have no discussion or argument. If your
friend
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disagree
Suggestion
disagrees
 with you, you can discuss with both views
,
Accept space
,
 reach compromise and come up with a suitable solution. But strong disagreement can often lead to a heated argument or even ruin your friendship. In my
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openion
a personal belief or judgment that is not founded on proof or certainty
opinion
,
Accept space
,
friends should not
agreey
be in accord; be in agreement
agree
agreed
 to
last
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 for long.
However
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, a
friend
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 with the same
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openion
a personal belief or judgment that is not founded on proof or certainty
opinion
opinions
 as yours will
definitly
without question and beyond doubt
definitely
 support your point of view in
anydiscussion
Suggestion
any discussion
. And it is a wonderful thing too. In
conclution
a position or opinion or judgment reached after consideration
conclusion
,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 would like to
saythat
Suggestion
say that
 it is good to have different views on some
topic s
the subject matter of a conversation or discussion
topics
 or
problems but
Accept comma addition
problems, but
 you should be loyal to the
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openion
first or beginning
opening
opinion
opinions
 of your
friend
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, Everyone should appreciate their friendship and
shoud
expresses an emotional, practical, or other reason for doing something
should
 not let stupid arguments it.
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