Now a days pollution is increasing , there are many reasons to it . Use Of plastic products and plastic bags has increased which cannot be recycled which creates pollution in the environment what steps people and government should take to reduce it , give reasons and examples for your answer.

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Presently
a days contamination is expanding
,
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,
there are numerous reasons
to
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for
it.Utilize of
plastic
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items and packs has
expande
increased in extent or size or bulk or scope
expanded
which cannot be
reused which
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reused, which
makes
contimation
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the continuation
continuation
within
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enviroment
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the environment
environment
an environment
.
This
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is mainly concerned of the
unawarness
unconsciousness resulting from lack of knowledge or attention
unawareness
amongs
in division, with shares to each
amongst
among
the people about usage of
plastic
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products and improper
sawage
waste matter carried away in sewers or drains
sewage
sewerage
salvage
system
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.There are
number
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a number
of
meauser
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measures
measure
to be taken to
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keep
enviroments
the totality of surrounding conditions
environments
clean.
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, the reason of increase use of
plastic
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bags and addition to
improper savage
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the improper sewage system
the improper savage system
system
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has polluted our
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enviroment
the totality of surrounding conditions
environment
.
In other words
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,
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,
all markets, shopkeeper sales their products in
plastic
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bags which
deteroriated
become worse or disintegrate
deteriorated
our
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enviroment
the totality of surrounding conditions
environment
.
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,
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,
all industries and homes no good
savage
waste matter carried away in sewers or drains
sewage
system
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.
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for
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For
example
,
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,
Plastic
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bags and savages are directly drained into fresh
water
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and river.
At
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As
a result
,
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,
the are harmful for life of marine
anmials
a living organism characterized by voluntary movement
animals
such
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as fishes, and turtles etc. There are
possible solution
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possible solutions
to prevent
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enviroment
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environmental
environment
pollution.One way to reduce a
plastic
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bag uses and
secondly
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arranged proper
water
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plants in every industry.Government and public
relaised
successfully completed or brought to an end
realised
realized
that improper and
countinoulsy
continuing in time or space without interruption
continuous
utilization of
plastic
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bags
should polluted
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should pollute
water
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.
For example
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The
plastic
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items and savages
makes
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make
water
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unstutiable
not meant or adapted for a particular purpose
unsuitable
for living.
Furthermore
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the endangers life of marine organisms and plants.
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Therefore in
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Therefore, in
order to
keeps
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keep
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enviroment
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the environment
environment
clean we should apply a strict rules about utilization of
plastic
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bags and improve and motivate people to use only
ecofriendly
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bags. In conclusion,
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enviroment
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the environment
environment
is
become
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becoming
more and more polluted due to
unnecssary
not necessary
unnecessary
usage of
plastic
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packs and improper savage
system
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which badly
effects
have an effect upon
affects
marine life.
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Therefore we
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Therefore, we
should arrange
awarness
having knowledge of
awareness
compaign
a race between candidates for elective office
campaign
campaigns
campaigner
, and
enviromental
of or relating to the external conditions or surroundings
environmental
programs and applying a strict rule to keep
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enviroment
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the environment
environment
clean.
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