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Now a days pollution is increasing , there are many reasons to it . Use Of plastic products and plastic bags has increased which cannot be recycled which creates pollution in the environment what steps people and government should take to reduce it , give reasons and examples for your answer.

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Preaently
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Presently
 a days contamination is expanding
,
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,
 there are numerous reasons
to
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for
 it.Utilize of
plastic
 items and packs has
expande
increased in extent or size or bulk or scope
expanded
 which cannot be
reused which
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reused, which
 makes
contimation
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the continuation
continuation
 within
enviroment
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the environment
environment
an environment
.
This
 is mainly concerned of the
unawarness
unconsciousness resulting from lack of knowledge or attention
unawareness
amongs
in division, with shares to each
amongst
among
 the people about usage of
plastic
 products and improper
sawage
waste matter carried away in sewers or drains
sewage
sewerage
salvage
system
.There are
number
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a number
 of
meauser
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measures
measure
 to be taken to
keeps
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keep
enviroments
the totality of surrounding conditions
environments
 clean.
Firstly
, the reason of increase use of
plastic
 bags and addition to
improper savage
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the improper sewage system
the improper savage system
system
 has polluted our
enviroment
the totality of surrounding conditions
environment
.
In other words
,
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,
 all markets, shopkeeper sales their products in
plastic
 bags which
deteroriated
become worse or disintegrate
deteriorated
 our
enviroment
the totality of surrounding conditions
environment
.
Secondly
,
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,
 all industries and homes no good
savage
waste matter carried away in sewers or drains
sewage
system
.
for
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For
 example
,
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,
Plastic
 bags and savages are directly drained into fresh
water
 and river.
At
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As
 a result
,
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,
 the are harmful for life of marine
anmials
a living organism characterized by voluntary movement
animals
such
 as fishes, and turtles etc. There are
possible solution
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possible solutions
 to prevent
enviroment
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environmental
environment
 pollution.One way to reduce a
plastic
 bag uses and
secondly
 arranged proper
water
 plants in every industry.Government and public
relaised
successfully completed or brought to an end
realised
realized
 that improper and
countinoulsy
continuing in time or space without interruption
continuous
 utilization of
plastic
 bags
should polluted
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should pollute
water
.
For example
 The
plastic
 items and savages
makes
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make
water
unstutiable
not meant or adapted for a particular purpose
unsuitable
 for living.
Furthermore
 the endangers life of marine organisms and plants.
Therefore in
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Therefore, in
 order to
keeps
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keep
enviroment
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the environment
environment
 clean we should apply a strict rules about utilization of
plastic
 bags and improve and motivate people to use only
ecofriendly
 bags. In conclusion,
enviroment
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the environment
environment
 is
become
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becoming
 more and more polluted due to
unnecssary
not necessary
unnecessary
 usage of
plastic
 packs and improper savage
system
 which badly
effects
have an effect upon
affects
 marine life.
Therefore we
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Therefore, we
 should arrange
awarness
having knowledge of
awareness
compaign
a race between candidates for elective office
campaign
campaigns
campaigner
, and
enviromental
of or relating to the external conditions or surroundings
environmental
 programs and applying a strict rule to keep
enviroment
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the environment
environment
 clean.
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