People in all modern societies use drugs, but today's youth are experimenting with both legal and ilegal drugs, and at an early age, some sociologists claim that parents and other members of society often set a bad example. Discuss the cause and effects of widespread drug abuse by young people. Make any recommendations you feel are necessary to help fight youth drug abuse.

Teenagers are the future of
country
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the country
and
performes
carry out or perform an action
performs
performed
crucial function
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a crucial function
in
modern community
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modern communities
a modern community
the modern community
.
Multitutes
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Multitudes
in all
evolistionised
society yet
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society, yet
nowadays growing
childs
a young person of either sex
children
orchids
are
testing
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tested
with both valid and invalid drugs, and at an
risingly
little age. Few sociologists believe that care taker and
other multitutes
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the other multitudes
other multitudes
of community usually set a bad instance. I will discuss both effects as well as causes along with my opinion.
To begin
with, the notion, the increasing concern of
drug
abuse
is nowadays
very huge issue
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a very huge issue
of the
society
.
Moreover
, there are ample of reasons which leads to
drug
utilisation by teenagers
such
as
bad peer group
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a bad peer group
,
stress
, depression and
drug
addictive
society
. In detail, youngster usually intake invalid medicine or initiate taking invalid medicine due to friends who are in the category of
drug
abuse
.
In addition
, nowadays teenagers have more
stress
of studies and family
pressure which
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pressure, which
leads to
stress
and anxiety for avoiding
this
they find
substanc
the real physical matter of which a person or thing consists
substance
substances
for relief from
stress
such
as
drug
like
coccaine
the act of preparing something (as food) by the application of heat
cooking
chicken
cocoon
.
However
, apart from
this
society
is the primary factor of
drug
abuse
the reason is
easily
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easy
availablity
the quality of being at hand when needed
availability
of illegal drugs in the community. Moving
further
to
effects
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the effects
of utilisation of drugs by younger
multitutes
a large indefinite number
multitudes
. In
this
present scenario
drug
addiction in teenager is very common because of easy available drugs which directly
effect
have an effect upon
affect
the health of any individual and
also
some time leads to death.
Moreover
,
must
used to form the superlative
most
of the growing birds are dying early due to
drug
intake. The major effect
Drug
utilisation is increasing death rate as well as effect on
society
and other
families
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families'
childrens
a young person of either sex
children
.
For instance
, recently the eminent news channel time of India
reveals
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has revealed
that depth rate Punjab raised by 10% especially youngster are involved only the reason is
drug
abuse
of illegal products all and all it
effects
have an effect upon
affects
the whole economy of the province and major concerns for
rigimes
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
regimes
regions
as well. In my opinion, government should amend strict laws regarding
drug
to control as well as making strict watch by the officials of police on
drug
addiction to avoid harsh conditions in
society
.
Moreover
, medication for
drug
adiicties
someone who is so ardently devoted to something that it resembles an addiction
addicts
to stop using drugs and make
society
clean and healthy. In summary, I want to restate that intake of valid drugs is
also
harmful when it is taken in overdose and illegal drugs are more harmful there are several causes and effects explained which affects
society
. So, regimes should take responsibility to avoid marketing of illegal drugs.
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