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There will be a traditional celebration in your country and you want to invite your friend from an English-speaking country. Write him/her a letter and - invite your friend, - explain what happens at the party, - describe the tradition and why it’s important in your country, - say why it is important for your friend to be there

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Dear Jay, I am writing
this
 letter to invite to celebrate our traditional festival with us
this
 year. While we
were studying
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studied
 together
last
 year, you promised to visit me and believe me
this
 is the best time of the year to come to Pakistan. While Eid is our religious festival and we celebrate it, when
Ramadan which
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Ramadan, which
 is an Islamic month has finished. On the Eid day, we clean our houses, cook delicious meals, and invite our kith and kin. And the most interesting thing is that children receive money as a gift from elders at
this
 festival. What is more, in our country, people from all walks of life celebrate it with great enthusiasm. As, it is a great opportunity for people to come closer to each other, leave behind their grievances, and forgive each other.
This
 is lots of fun and frolic.
Moreover
, attending
this
 event will be of great importance for you because, as I know, it would be helpful for your thesis project which is about globalization.
However
, in Pakistan you will come to know that we have not forgotten over traditions. We would be
honored
having an illustrious reputation; respected
honoured
 to have you at home as our guest. I assure you we will make it a memorable holiday for you. Hoping to see you soon!

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