Nowadays newspapers publish information about private lives of individuals. Some people think the government should maintain certain control over the information that gets published, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Information
, which is disclosed to the public about the lifestyle of a
person
, be being so apparent in these days in many
newspaper
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newspapers
. While it is thought
be
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to be
some that the
government
in a country should set a limit about the
information
that will be published, other people
thank
judge or regard; look upon; judge
think
that the
government
should not interfere in
this
matter. In my opinion, I consider that no bureaucratic authority should have
control
over the news that
newspaper
company
will publish. On the one hand, some people argue that
government
should take steps so that
newspaper
company
cannot publish
information
about anyone’s personal lives. The reason behind that thinking is that the
government
of any country has the responsibilities to protect the rights of privacy of individuals. So, if a country’s
newspapers
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newspaper
disclose
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discloses
the private
information
of its citizens, people will raise questions about the duties of a
government
.
Moreover
,
public
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the public
will lose confidence
on
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in
the
government
. Another reason is that every
person
has some private matters, which they do not want to disclose to the public.
For example
, if a celebrity gets married for the 4th time, he or she may not will
to publish
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publish
that news.
Therefore
, the
government
should maintain
certain
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a certain control
control
over the news, which must not be published.
On the other hand
, others believe that the authority from the
government
should not have
control
over the
newspaper
company
and I agree. The plausible reason for
this
is that through the
government
interruption the
independency
freedom from control or influence of another or others
independence
of working by
newspaper
company
will be hampered.
As a result
, the beauty of representing news by the media will be demolished and people will not fully trust to the
newspaper
. Another main cause is that people want to know the lifestyle of the artists and popular
person
.
In other words
,
public
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the public
want to follow the some renowned
person
by knowing about their personal lives.
Moreover
,
public
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the public
set
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sets
some people as idols, who achieved success in their life.
Thus
, the
government
should not set
limit
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limits
over the personal
information
publication.
Although
people have different perspectives bureaucratic authority of a country should not maintain any
control
about news, which will be disclosed in the
newspaper
.
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  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

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