Nowadays newspapers publish information about private lives of individuals. Some people think the government should maintain certain control over the information that gets published, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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, which is disclosed to the public about the lifestyle of a
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, be being so apparent in these days in many
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newspapers
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some that the
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in a country should set a limit about the
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that will be published, other people
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should not interfere in
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matter. In my opinion, I consider that no bureaucratic authority should have
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over the news that
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company
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will publish. On the one hand, some people argue that
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should take steps so that
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company
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cannot publish
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about anyone’s personal lives. The reason behind that thinking is that the
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of any country has the responsibilities to protect the rights of privacy of individuals. So, if a country’s
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newspaper
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discloses
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of its citizens, people will raise questions about the duties of a
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the public
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. Another reason is that every
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has some private matters, which they do not want to disclose to the public.
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, if a celebrity gets married for the 4th time, he or she may not will
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publish
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, the
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should maintain
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a certain control
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over the news, which must not be published.
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, others believe that the authority from the
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should not have
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over the
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company
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and I agree. The plausible reason for
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is that through the
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interruption the
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freedom from control or influence of another or others
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company
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will be hampered.
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, the beauty of representing news by the media will be demolished and people will not fully trust to the
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. Another main cause is that people want to know the lifestyle of the artists and popular
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the public
want to follow the some renowned
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by knowing about their personal lives.
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the public
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some people as idols, who achieved success in their life.
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, the
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should not set
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limits
over the personal
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publication.
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people have different perspectives bureaucratic authority of a country should not maintain any
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about news, which will be disclosed in the
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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