Topic: Some people think that men are naturally more competitive than women. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The human race has been created in

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men feel more competitive than

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women.

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fact, since the start of the world. I tend more towards the side where the women definitely make more effort to compete. I would agree slightly with the above topic.

However

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we shall discuss why a few people would beg to differ and some may agree with the statement. Even now humans are of the opinion that

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men are naturally more eager to win in any given scenario. Most of the freedom fighters have always been men, whether

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Hitler or Mahatma Gandhi. They had the urge to win over the intruders and became victorious. In the field of corporate, as we move up the ladder 90

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of the top management are the

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stronger sex. They have a greater amount of ego. In a game of

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mere chess, he would hate losing to the woman.

This

is how a man has been brought up in

this

world that you are superior

than

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the opposite sex and you cannot lose.

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, the kind of domestic violence that happens in the country is only because he cannot see his lady

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better than him in any way. He tries to control her.

Finally

,

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has been the plight in many countries and looks like now things are changing for the better

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even

woman

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women

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are coming up as a natural competitor.

On the other hand

, she need not be naturally ferocious. As they are inherently built so strong by the creator. They are coming up in all the fields, whether in the field of sports or even

establishing

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businesses. They are everywhere from acting to directing to going to space to leading the country.

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by example and are emotionally more stable. Being recognized on par with a man has been the biggest accomplishment for the opposite sex.

To conclude

, we are in the world of equals. In context to the question, I would agree by saying it

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very easy for a man to be competitive as it's in their genes. I would

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say that yes, we

woman

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are not far behind and are in fact

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more superior human beings.