“Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?”

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The world has become a local market, anyone can buy any product from a wide range of products available, buying patterns are

also

changing day by

day which

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day, which

results in similarity of goods available, online shopping expansion of multinational companies has introduced a wide range of products in all the countries. The production of any product

for

example cloths

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example, cloths

has increased and companies Amazon, Walmart has increased the reach to people and made it available to everyone

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with

ease, now you can order any product from anywhere and it will be delivered to your home in your comfort. The new companies are crossing regions and selling their products all over the world which are same. The customer's buying pattern is

also

changing and kids/younger generation are much more interested in western products from

cloths

clothing in general

clothes

to toys, the trade between countries has increased a lot, due to

this

few brands which are really big are selling their products all over the world. After LPG act (Liberalization, Privatization and Globalization,) 1991 the countries like India, Pakistan and other countries

also

started liberalizing their policies and resulted in increased trade, so western countries started selling the products in which were very common to US/UK products. In my

opinion

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opinion, this

this

development has both positive and negative

impact

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impacts

, as

younger generation

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the younger generation

is forgetting their native culture and trying to be more western, and

also

the economy is

also

getting dependent on other countries for some products. The positive is that all the countries and becoming unified and trying to follow the same culture, and countries are

also

helping each other in development.

Wed Sep 25 2019

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globalization
cultural homogenization
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standard of living
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multinational corporations
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“Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?”

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it is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

Some people argue that space exploration has had more to do with national pride than international effort. To what extent do you agree with this? How do you think space exploration will change in the future?

You were recently disrespected by one of the employees at your local supermarket. Write a letter to the supermarket manager. In your letter • tell why you were speaking with the employee • describe the employee's rude behavior • explain what you'd like the manager to do

All students should study a foreign language in school, starting in their earliest grades. To What extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

Some people think that cultural traditions may be destroyed when they are used as money-making attractions aimed at tourists. Others believe it is the only way to save these traditions. Discuss both views and give your opinion.