“Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?”

The world has become a local market, anyone can buy any product from a wide range of products available, buying patterns are
also
changing day by
day which
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day, which
results in similarity of goods available, online shopping expansion of multinational companies has introduced a wide range of products in all the countries. The production of any product
for
example cloths
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example, cloths
has increased and companies Amazon, Walmart has increased the reach to people and made it available to everyone
on
Suggestion
at
with
ease, now you can order any product from anywhere and it will be delivered to your home in your comfort. The new companies are crossing regions and selling their products all over the world which are same. The customer's buying pattern is
also
changing and kids/younger generation are much more interested in western products from
cloths
clothing in general
clothes
to toys, the trade between countries has increased a lot, due to
this
few brands which are really big are selling their products all over the world. After LPG act (Liberalization, Privatization and Globalization,) 1991 the countries like India, Pakistan and other countries
also
started liberalizing their policies and resulted in increased trade, so western countries started selling the products in which were very common to US/UK products. In my
opinion
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opinion, this
this
development has both positive and negative
impact
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impacts
, as
younger generation
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the younger generation
is forgetting their native culture and trying to be more western, and
also
the economy is
also
getting dependent on other countries for some products. The positive is that all the countries and becoming unified and trying to follow the same culture, and countries are
also
helping each other in development.

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