Social media is becoming increasingly popular amongest all age groups. However, sharing personal information on social media websites does have risks. DO YOU THINK THAT THE ADVANTAGES OF SOCIAL MEDIA OUTWEIGH THE DISADVANTAGES?

Technology has

flurished

grow vigorously

flourished

leaps and bounds in recent times, which

infact

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in fact

has

contibuted

bestow a quality on

contributed

in

number

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Number

of people using social media. Not only the youngsters, but

also

it has managed to keep people of different ages involved.

However

, not everything shared online is secure; it involves a significant amount of risk. I believe that social media has given people

resons

a rational motive for a belief or action

reasons

reason

to live and

hence

, the advantages of using it clearly outclasses the disadvantages. The following essay shall shed more light on

this

.

Firstly

, social media has allowed introverts to be more expressive than they were before. Most people do not find themselves comfortable having an in-person conversation, they rather like some time to respond and social media has given them a solid platform to be expressive.

Secondly

, with the introduction of different application; social media has made life interesting.

For example

: the online dating application- Tinder;

allowes

make it possible through a specific action or lack of action for something to happen

allows

allowed

you to connect with different people who share common interests.

In addition

, according to

report

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a report

the report

published by New York times: 60% victims of

dipression

a mental state characterized by a pessimistic sense of inadequacy and a despondent lack of activity

depression

depressions

desperation

are the ones who failed to meet the right partner.

Hence

,

such

platform simplifies their lives. There are few

diadvantages

the quality of having an inferior or less favorable position

disadvantages

advantages

of submitting personal details on social media.

To begin

with, who could

foret

dismiss from the mind; stop remembering

forget

ferret

the "Facebook scam"? The social

medial

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media

giant had sold their customer data to other companies in order to cover up their

loses

something lost (especially money lost at gambling)

losses

. Now,

that is

one complete misuse of customer trust. Another major drawback is: cyber bullying. Bullying has always been a concerning issue,

however with

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however, with

extensive use of social medial it has given birth to cyber

bulying

noisily domineering; tending to browbeat others

bullying

which could have devastating effects. To conclude, though online media

has

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have

some detrimental effects, with preventive measures it clearly outlaws the disadvantages.