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some people believe that it is wrong to keep animals in zoos, while others think that zoos are both entertainment and ecological important. Discuss both views

#people #animals #zoos #entertainment
People have different opinions about whether to allow
animal
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animals
the animal
 to live in
zoo
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a zoo
the zoo
zoos
 or not.
This
 essay will cover both the arguments. Many are against of putting animals in the
zoo
 because they think
this
 method is unethical and cruel.By keeping them in the cage means we are snatching their freedom from them.As animals are born in
such
 manner
,
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,
so that they can live in open fields like jungles.
Moreover
,
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,
some think that animals are not treated well.There might be chances that
zookeppers
 treat them
cruely
excessively
cruelly
cruel
 and not give them enough food to eat.
As a result
, they become diseased.
For Instance
,
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,
in India a few years ago several tigers were dying in the
zoo
 because of malnutrition.
On the other hand
, many think from different perspectives.They believe that zoos are a vital source of leisure and helps in keeping safe the animals in order to maintain the earth ecological system.From the entertainment point of view
,
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,
zoos are fun for human as they get the
oppurtunity
a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances
opportunity
 to see different creatures form very close.Some of those are
also
 originating from different countries.
For example
,
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,
there are many tourist places which have main attractions are zoos and wildlife centuries.
Thus
 the main source of entertainment,.
In addition
 to that there are several rare species, which are
in
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on
 the verge of extinction.They are necessary to balance the ecology of the earth.For
such
 endangered species
,
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,
zoo
 is the appropriate place to protect them from predators or other disasters.
in
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In
 conclusion.
it
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It
 is true that to
bound
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bind
 the animals to live in a cage is immoral.
Although
,
Accept space
,
it is
also
 crucial to maintain an animal
zoo
 for leisure and for protecting the environment.
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    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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