The charts show how tourism to two countries changed over a 50-year period. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The four pie charts compare the proportions of tourists visited from four different countries
to
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Australia
and Germany
in the years of
1960 and 2010.
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Overall
, in the period of beginning
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the beginning
Europeans
were the
dominant in both countries, Change the article
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while
Asians
were the significant visitors to Australia
in 2010, Europeans
remained top in Germany
after 50 years.
In 1960, the most number of visitors to the
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Australia
and Germany
was
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were
Europeans
with 53% and 45% respectively. Britain
people were the second
highest commuters to the
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Australia
, with a quarter of proportion
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the proportion
exactly
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is exactly
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the same
USA
travellers in the
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Germany
. However
, Germany
had 20% of the Britain
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and 10
of
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the
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Asians
. The USA
people and Asians
were the least significant in commute
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commuting
the
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Australia
, with 12% and 10%.
In 2010, Asians
dominated by
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Australia
, with 63%, where
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whereas
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the Europeans
Europeans
percentage sharply declined from 53%to 10%, which was a major drop in Replace the word
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Australia
tourism. From Correct your spelling
Australian
Britain
and the USA
, visitors experienced a fall of 5%. On the other hand
, Europeans
decreased to 40% in Germany
, still remained top among others. It is interesting to note that, the Asians
percentage increased from 10% to 25% as compared to the Replace the word
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USA
from 25% to 29%. Britain
was the low country, only 6% contributed to the
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