Some parents want their children to read only serious educational books at all times, and they think it is a waste of time to read any entertainments books.What is your opinion about this?

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Some parents believe that their children should focus on reading serious educational books
instead
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of other entertaining books. I completely disagree with
this
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view because it will result in children losing
interets
a sense of concern with and curiosity about someone or something
interest
in reading. Children will probably lose interest in reading books if parents require them to only read those books which are of
educaitonal
relating to the process of education
educational
value.
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because most of that kind of books
are boring
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is boring
. They are full of
sophisiticated
having or appealing to those having worldly knowledge and refinement and savoir-faire
sophisticated
figures and complex concepts. Children may spend most of their time figuring out the complex equations and reciting essays. Gradually they will feel stressed if their brains keep
learnig
the cognitive process of acquiring skill or knowledge
learning
various difficult concepts and struggling with remembering them. In the end
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may result in their giving up reading and
leaning
the cognitive process of acquiring skill or knowledge
learning
new things. In my opinion, I do not think
reading entertaning
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reading, entertaining
reading entertaining
books is wasting time.
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, reading interesting books can encourage them
read
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to read
more books. Children can find pleasure from reading those books which can help them relax.
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, picture books can inspire their
imagnation
the formation of a mental image of something that is not perceived as real and is not present to the senses
imagination
; some fun science books can improve their creativity. Those books can open a door to another world for them and encourage them to
enojoy
derive or receive pleasure from; get enjoyment from; take pleasure in
enjoy
their lives.
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, if they are interested in some topics, they may read more related books to expand their knowledge and gain more experience.
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is
also
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a learning process and not a waste of time. In conclusion, I believe that reading a wide range of books can help children contact a more
colorful
having striking color
colourful
world and grow up to be a well developed person.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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