In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country, while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In the economic structures of many countries in the world, it is observed that a huge deviation exists
among
the salary structure of the employees. Some employees usually earn extremely high salaries, whereas, many other have lower pay scales. Some people consider it a positive sign Suggestion
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limits
salaries
amount. I will discuss both opinions in my Essay.
On the one hand, it is believed that earning higher levels of salaries Suggestion
salary
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beneficial for Suggestion
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country
, government and the individuals earning it. Suggestion
the country
Moreover
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salary scale that means heUse synonyms
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she deserves it and company values hisUse synonyms
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her competences and experience. Use synonyms
For Instance
, we consider cement sector and taking real life example of D.G. Linking Words
Khan Cement Company
, which is indeed the Suggestion
The Khan Cement Company
second
largest cement producing company in Pakistan. By Linking Words
analyzing
pay structure, it is observed that an electrical engineer is earning approximately half a Million Rupees a consider in detail and subject to an analysis in order to discover essential features or meaning
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the same position in terms of grade. It is because of the fact that an electrical engineer is technical person and spends more of his time Suggestion
in
outdoor
and believed to be a key person in the plant. Suggestion
outdoors
Subsequently
, he deserves more salaryLinking Words
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the other hand, many people believe that there has to be a limit over the remunerations paid to employees and government should backSuggestion
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organize the same. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, by sealing the pay scale or by limiting the amount, almost all the employees of any organization would be benefited as the pay scale of the people with lower salaries will be improved. Linking Words
For Instance
, MCB Bank Limited is Linking Words
largest financial institution
in Pakistan. Suggestion
the largest financial institution
In addition
, the same approach can be observed in Linking Words
this
organization as the model discussed earlier is well implemented in Linking Words
this
esteemed Bank. Resultantly, the employees working in Linking Words
this
Bank are very much satisfied, motivated and contented. On the top of it, the Bank is growing at a rapid pace and earning huge profits as well as paying more than 3 Billion Rupees as Tax to Government of Pakistan.
In a nutshell, it can be said that the both approaches are logical and beneficial in many contexts. But in my opinion, the proper distribution of wealth is always a better approach and provides benefits to more and more people. Linking Words
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, the employers, employees, companies and governments all Linking Words
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Word Count
IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.
A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.
Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.