IELTS Writing Correction Service /
Writing Samples /
Band 4

The Internet will never replace traditional course books in schools.’ How far do you agree with this prediction?

#internet #course #books #schools #prediction
Is
Internet
 a replacement for traditional
course
 books
?
Accept space
?
 In
this
 essay I would like to express my opinion whether
internet
Suggestion
the internet
 is a replacement for traditional
course
 books in schools Necessity is
mother
Suggestion
the mother
 of all inventions and
internet
 is one of the most important tools
that is
 invented by human beings in the modern times that has transformed our lives in many ways. Google search is the most popular search engine used on
internet
Suggestion
the internet
 for people to ask
questions be
Accept comma addition
questions, be
 it
address
Suggestion
the address
 of a location, timings of different countries
,
Accept space
,
 currency conversions etc.,
with
Suggestion
With
advancement
Suggestion
the advancement
 of
internet
 people has considered
internet
 as a source for obtaining answers ranging from simple tasks to learning rocket science. Similar to an old proverb "All that glitters is not gold " all the answers that are shown on the
internet
 are not true and reliable.It is true that
internet
 has drastically improved and eased way of
living but
Accept comma addition
living, but
 at the same
time users
Accept comma addition
time, users
 should
also
 be cautious not to believe all information found on
internet
Suggestion
the internet
 unless it is verified in some form. Students in
this
 current generation are staring to use
internet
 from an early age as computer education is being taught as an academic subject across various
countries countries
a politically organized body of people under a single government
countries
 across the globe with developed countries leading the way. One of the primary uses of the
internet
 for students from primary school to graduate school is to search for
course
 content related to specific subjects that would help
student
Suggestion
the student
a student
 in resolving or assist in completion of assignment tasks
,
Accept space
,
this
 is adopted by not all students but a majority of students as it would help them to save time
instead
 of going through academic
course
 books. Academic
course
 books have a lot of content
that is
 required for a student to thoroughly understand a particular subject and would help them to learn and explore new things which is essential to
learning process
Suggestion
the learning process
.
Similarly academic
Suggestion
Similarly, academic
Similar academic
Similar Similar academic
course
 books are written by experts after a significant amount of research and always are based on facts which makes them more reliable.
Internet
 has a vast amount of information than
a
Suggestion
an
 academic
course
work but
Accept comma addition
work, but
 it has its own challenges on
reliability
Suggestion
the reliability
 of information being fed In
summary I
Accept comma addition
summary, I
 strongly agree that
Internet
Suggestion
the Internet
 cannot be a replacement for academic
course
works but
Accept comma addition
works, but
 it should
also
 be noted that
Internet
Suggestion
the Internet
 has
man
a quantifier that can be used with count nouns and is often preceded by 'as' or 'too' or 'so' or 'that'; amounting to a large but indefinite number
many
 other advantages which can be used for various purposes and should be used with caution when using it for a learning purpose.

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: