The Internet will never replace traditional course books in schools.’ How far do you agree with this prediction?

Is
Internet
a replacement for traditional
course
books
?
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In
this
essay I would like to express my opinion whether
internet
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the internet
is a replacement for traditional
course
books in schools Necessity is
mother
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the mother
of all inventions and
internet
is one of the most important tools
that is
invented by human beings in the modern times that has transformed our lives in many ways. Google search is the most popular search engine used on
internet
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the internet
for people to ask
questions be
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questions, be
it
address
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the address
of a location, timings of different countries
,
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,
currency conversions etc.,
with
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With
advancement
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the advancement
of
internet
people has considered
internet
as a source for obtaining answers ranging from simple tasks to learning rocket science. Similar to an old proverb "All that glitters is not gold " all the answers that are shown on the
internet
are not true and reliable.It is true that
internet
has drastically improved and eased way of
living but
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living, but
at the same
time users
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time, users
should
also
be cautious not to believe all information found on
internet
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the internet
unless it is verified in some form. Students in
this
current generation are staring to use
internet
from an early age as computer education is being taught as an academic subject across various
countries countries
a politically organized body of people under a single government
countries
across the globe with developed countries leading the way. One of the primary uses of the
internet
for students from primary school to graduate school is to search for
course
content related to specific subjects that would help
student
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the student
a student
in resolving or assist in completion of assignment tasks
,
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,
this
is adopted by not all students but a majority of students as it would help them to save time
instead
of going through academic
course
books. Academic
course
books have a lot of content
that is
required for a student to thoroughly understand a particular subject and would help them to learn and explore new things which is essential to
learning process
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the learning process
.
Similarly academic
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Similarly, academic
Similar academic
Similar Similar academic
course
books are written by experts after a significant amount of research and always are based on facts which makes them more reliable.
Internet
has a vast amount of information than
a
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an
academic
course
work but
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work, but
it has its own challenges on
reliability
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the reliability
of information being fed In
summary I
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summary, I
strongly agree that
Internet
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the Internet
cannot be a replacement for academic
course
works but
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works, but
it should
also
be noted that
Internet
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the Internet
has
man
a quantifier that can be used with count nouns and is often preceded by 'as' or 'too' or 'so' or 'that'; amounting to a large but indefinite number
many
other advantages which can be used for various purposes and should be used with caution when using it for a learning purpose.

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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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