Some people think that it is the responsibility of governments to take care of the environment, while others believe that it is the responsibility of the citizens. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Rapid globalisation and advanced

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are deeply affecting

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nature.

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some people believe that the public is responsible for environmental issues, others argue that civic

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should make strict laws to keep it under control.

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essay shall discuss both of these views

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and why I strongly think the

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will always have an edge over citizens to protect Mother Earth. There are apparent compelling reasons to believe that, citizens play a vital role in protecting the

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. One of the major issues, nowadays is, air pollution which is caused by the increasing number of cars on the roads. The PH level in the air could be decreased with coordinated action of people

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if they start using communal

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services or shared cabs. Waste disposal is another emerging reason. Though an individual cannot force others to safeguard

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nature,

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he / she should take the onus of their own surroundings by making

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to throw waste in the dustbin and making their neighbours aware

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the importance of the

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for future generations.

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, public

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hold a greater duty towards environmental challenges.

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with, the

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must draft more stronger environmental laws, with heavy penalties so that large industries adhere to legal regulations. In China,

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, industrial companies are regularly watched by their

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in order to strike a balance between their business and the

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. Because of

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companies have mitigated the release of their hazardous chemicals into water

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of an unauthorised large building is another rising global issue. Both the national and the state

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must regularize and restrict the unwanted development of these buildings, especially in developing countries.

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, our Earth is degrading day by day. Even if the public is making continuous efforts to save

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nature, the ultimate power of protecting natural resources lies in the hands of

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government

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agencies and large industries which are toxic

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the

environment

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large extent.