More and more people are buying ready to eat food instead of cooking themselves. Does this development has more advantages or more disadvantages.

Man through the ages, from a period
one
can hunt for a
food
to the present
time
. When
one
can buy a preprocessed
food
in restaurant/Small shops some people say nowadays we can prepare
food
easily without putting lots of effort with the help of preprocessed items and technology when compare to olden days, other people think that consumption of preprocessed brings a
lot
of disadvantages for human health so they prepare for freshly cooking
food
. In my view we do have an advantages and disadvantages of both options so I’ll analysis, both options and present my opinion in following paragraphs. From
one
side, Preprocessed
food
brings lots of benefits to the human beings and society.
Firstly
,
one
can save lots of
time
with the help of preprocessed
food
and
one
cannot spend his
time
in the kitchen for peeling and cutting of vegetables, washing, cooking and preparation of various kinds of dishes.
One
can spend his
time
with his loved ones, exercise and walking with friendly dogs.
Secondly
, we can
taste
put to the test, as for its quality, or give experimental use to
test
out a
lot
of varieties of items without spending much
time
with the help of modern technology and
also
we can use microwaves to prepare the
food
in short span of
time
in addition
to that
one
has capability of spending money there would be an option to visit the restaurant where a person can enjoy various
variety
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varieties
of items like Mexican and American extra with good service and
one
can enjoy
food
by sitting in a nice environment and get relaxation. From the other side
,
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,
some people think that preprocessed
food
is not good for health because of ingredients/chemicals that are used to keep the items of preprocessed
food
.
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.
Unfortunately
,
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,
we’re seeing
negative aspects
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the negative aspects
of eating of preprocessed foods in newspaper and
television
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television, moreover
moreover
health experts are alerting us to go for cooking rather than preprocessed items and they advise us to cook when we’ve a sufficient
time
.
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.
In conclusion
,
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,
cooking is a great tradition and brings
lot
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a lot
lots
of
relax
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relaxing
ion for the people more over helps to come out from
pressure
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the pressure
and we can
spent
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spend
time
with loved ones and helps to come out daily activities
.
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.
Every person has own scale of thinking I can say based on
one
’s
time
availability financial condition they have to decide option either cooking or proposed foods
.
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.
finally we
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Finally, we
Finally we
can’t forgot
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can’t forget
cooking and do not abuse/avoid the proposed foods
.
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.
Please
note I
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note, I
’ve to develop in spelling – auto corrected
lot
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lots
of spellings –Please review and provide comments now I’m start seeing yours.

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