Smoking not only harms the smoker, but also those who are nearby. Therefore, smoking should be banned in public places. Do you agree or disagree?

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It
s saying that-"Smoking is injurious to
health
";
Thus
it should not be permitted in public places
such
as Shopping malls, Metro Stations, Bus stops and so forth. As it not only has a detrimental effect on smoker it
self but o
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itself, but
n the surrounding people
also
. The viewpoint of prohibiting smoking
also
finds fa
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favour
favours
ith me, owing to its negative impacts
such
as it can cause
cancer
moreover
it creates
air
pollution which contributes towards environmental degradation.
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the negative effects
f smoking and potential reasons for banning it. Cigarette fumes contain carcinogenic substances that are medically pr
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proven
he potential substance of
cancer
.
Furthermore
, some chain smokers tend to constantly smoke in public places;
therefore
, injecting lethal toxins in their bodies as well as in the bodies of the public around them through fumes.
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This
ead to various kinds of
ca
ncer
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cancer, such
such
as mouth
cancer
, lu
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lung
cancer
and even blood
cancer
as well.
For instance
, it is evident from an article published by the newspaper " The Tribune", that family member of smokers likely to suffer from various breathing-related diseases
such
as Asthma and lu
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lung
nfection and kidney failure due to lethal toxins absorbed through smoke
air
.
Thus
, smoking cigarette not only degrades the
health
of sm
oker but
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the smoker, but
the smoker but
smokers but
also
nearby people indirectly.
Thus
banning cigarette in public places is certainly a positive approach to curb
this
menace. Another negative impact of smoking is
air
po
llution it c
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pollution, it
auses. When a person smoke cigarette,
then
, toxins are absorbed in the
air
through fumes. Inhaling that
air
people can prone to various diseases.
For instance
, it is proved by a survey conducted by the
Health
Department of China is that a person can still suffer from
cancer
by inhaling sm
oking f
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smoke
umes constantly. So, smoker not only taking a toll on his
he
alth but o
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health, but
n the other people
also
unintentionally. To conclude, having an
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examined carefully and methodically; broken down for consideration of constituent parts
analysed
he above mentioned dangerous effects of smoking in public
such
as it can be a threat to public
health
by spreading toxins in the
air
along with un
intendedly c
ausing the degrading public
health
. In
this
scenario, we are only left with banning smoking in public places as a viable solution to
this
problem.
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