Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?

Technology has made so much advancement in
this
modern world and we are continuing to become more and more dependent on technology day by day. These days online shopping has become so common and we can find almost everything online like books, tickets and all other daily life needs. As there are pros and cons to everything, so
does
engage in
makes
online shopping. I do believe that there are more advantages to online shopping than disadvantages. Online shopping has introduced markets to even those remote
location
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locations
which previously had no access to markets. One of my
friend
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friends
lives in a rural area, there is a small town located in Punjab, where no market is established and they do not have a variety of products to
but
obtain by purchase; acquire by means of a financial transaction
buy
boot
bolt
bait
from. Even buying a ticket was very burdensome for them. Now they can buy train or air ticket easily through internet.
This
online way of shopping is
also
beneficial for those who are busy is their work and it is very difficult for them to visit markets for shopping after their tiresome day. They get time to spend with their family during
weekend
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the weekend
instead
of spending their time on shopping. These days with growing online markets, you can see competition between different stores
thus
benefiting the customers. As I mentioned earlier, there are pros and cons to almost everything. There is one setback which I can consider. Sometimes, you might get scammed by someone online. You have to be very careful while buy something online and processing a payment. Government with the cooperation of IT experts is taking certain steps to make
Internet
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the Internet
more secure. Most of the accounts are insured by banks, and if you get scammed, often you get your money back. To conclude It can be said that, even there are some obstacles, still these
obstacle
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obstacles
cannot overpower the advantages of online shopping and online markets will continue to expand with time.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • convenience
  • time-saving
  • wide selection
  • competitive prices
  • discounts
  • accessibility
  • global marketplace
  • availability
  • fraud
  • scams
  • lack of
  • physical interaction
  • personal experience
  • impersonal
  • customer service
  • delays
  • delivery
  • return process
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