Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?

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Technology has made so much advancement in

this

modern world and we are continuing to become more and more dependent on technology day by day. These days online shopping has become so common and we can find almost everything online like books, tickets and all other daily life needs. As there are pros and cons to everything, so

does

engage in

makes

online shopping. I do believe that there are more advantages to online shopping than disadvantages. Online shopping has introduced markets to even those remote

location

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locations

which previously had no access to markets. One of my

friend

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friends

lives in a rural area, there is a small town located in Punjab, where no market is established and they do not have a variety of products to

but

obtain by purchase; acquire by means of a financial transaction

buy

boot

bolt

bait

from. Even buying a ticket was very burdensome for them. Now they can buy train or air ticket easily through internet.

This

online way of shopping is

also

beneficial for those who are busy is their work and it is very difficult for them to visit markets for shopping after their tiresome day. They get time to spend with their family during

weekend

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the weekend

instead

of spending their time on shopping. These days with growing online markets, you can see competition between different stores

thus

benefiting the customers. As I mentioned earlier, there are pros and cons to almost everything. There is one setback which I can consider. Sometimes, you might get scammed by someone online. You have to be very careful while buy something online and processing a payment. Government with the cooperation of IT experts is taking certain steps to make

Internet

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the Internet

more secure. Most of the accounts are insured by banks, and if you get scammed, often you get your money back. To conclude It can be said that, even there are some obstacles, still these

obstacle

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obstacles

cannot overpower the advantages of online shopping and online markets will continue to expand with time.

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Topic Vocabulary:

convenience
time-saving
wide selection
competitive prices
discounts
accessibility
global marketplace
availability
fraud
scams
lack of
physical interaction
personal experience
impersonal
customer service
delays
delivery
return process

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Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?

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The most important aim of science should be to improve people's lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people believe that it is the responsibility of individuals to take care of their own health and diet. Others, however, believe that government should make sure that their citizens have a healthy diet. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some educationalists think that international exchange visits will benefit teenagers at the school. To what extent do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

In today’s world, private companies rather than the government pay for and conduct most of scientific research. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages ?

Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.