Some parents believe that a child should not vest time by reading intertaimats book, instant they should spend time to read education book only

Several parents confided that reading
intertaimat
book is not
need
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needed
to
child
.
Is
refers to the speaker or writer
I
think that
instead
of it reading education book is more useful for
child
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children
a child
. On the one hand,
this
point of view true. If
child
we're
vest
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vested
his time to more reading a
fairytale
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fairy tale
he would be understand the essence of
live
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life
on
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in
a fantastic and imaginative way. He would
adopt
make fit for, or change to suit a new purpose
adapt
to it and become helpless in the face of pressing issue in life.
On the other hand
, it is not true to for
it
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
children from reading
fairytales
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fairy tales
. Because,
firstly
reading
scents books
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scents, books
on a regular basis is boring and it seems
difficulty
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difficult
. The
child
brain is
tried
depleted of strength or energy
tired
and fence of reading many great books.
Secondly the main
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Secondly, the main
idea of
fairytale
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a fairytale
the fairytale
are
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is
goodness, and we often find a good and bad reputation in skirts. The
child
can distinguish between good and bad. In the course of reading
fairytale
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fairy tale
, positive heroins appear in the eyes and is
strive
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striving
to be like them
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