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ich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid.

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It is commonly known that poverty is one of the most pressing
issuesin
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issues in
 the world and we have to resolve it as soon as possible.
Althoughcurrently
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Although currently
 the most common support for poor countries is financial aid, rich countries should provide different
typesof
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types of
 help.
This
 essay will explain why and will provide evidence.
Firstly
, providing access to education is a more effective tool to solve the poverty problem than giving financial aid.
Recent study
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A recent study
have shown
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has shown
shows
showed
 that one dollar spent on education in poor countries generates 2 dollars growth in gross domestic product (GDP), while one dollar that goes
on
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for
 other types of help generates slightly less than a 1.2 dollar growth in gross domestic product.
Moreover
, the vast majority of
studentsfrom
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students from
Third
 World countries who receive scholarships in the most prestigious colleges in the United States and Europe pass all exams with flying colours.
Secondly
,
most rich
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richer
 countries do not control what financial aid is spent on, since evaluation of
this
 spending is extremely hard to execute. For instance, recent scientific research from Harvard Business School indicates that seventy percent of financial support obtained
by
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from
 poor
countriesis
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countries is
 spent on the consumption.. Rich countries need to be able to assess the results of provided help.
o
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O
 sum up, increasing
standardsof
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standards of
 living in
Third
 World countries is extremely important.
Therefore we
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Therefore, we
 have to find the most effective tools to do
this
.
This
 essay described why giving money is not the best method to do
this
, as we don ́t know what it is spent on, and
instead
 education is the solution.
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