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Some people prefer to work on school projects with a group, while others would rather work alone. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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It is important to consider people prefer to
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 on
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 projects. While some of the people
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 with groups on
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 projects and others
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 alone. In
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 essay, I will discuss both sides of the argument.
Firstly
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, Most of the people wish to
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 on a
school
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 project with a get together because as a
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 they will not feel stress at
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 as well as discuss if required any help from others and
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 the
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 together.
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, especially in the
school
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 projects, if they want to organize an exam for students, all the people
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 on it everyone
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 some of the
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 with their excellence to conduct the exam. Some people will arrange and organize question papers and others will make the correction of the answer papers. Some people will go for invigilation.
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, they will conduct exams properly. As a
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 they will enjoy their
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 as well.
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, some of the folks not willing to
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 as a
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 due to they cannot
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 their knowledge and some of them having inferiority.
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, If someone says to
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 on it, they cannot listen and how
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 guy saying to me
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 on it. Here individuality and ego will come into the picture and if asked something to them, they simply ignore or not participated in the program due to personal ego. These kind of people not help anybody as well as
share
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 their knowledge with them. In the conclusion, people who are willing to
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 as a
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, they will enjoy their
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 and help to other co-workers and others having some personal issue. In my opinion, I would like to
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 as a
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 because I will enjoy the
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 and
share
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 the knowledge to everyone.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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